My Request To God

I think of you and I can hear your voice in
paradise ... grandma talk to god to come back
one more time ... until my day comes.
I want to be the girl who played in the room
and I ran into your arms.
 Talk to God
that I will be obedient, a good girl
just to have you again with me.
This is not a letter because you never
learned to read with his eyes ...
You always read with your beautiful heart,
my grandmother and foster mother.
I know that God will understand me ...
I always
I will love you my princess with white hair.
I'll wait for you sitting in our old chair ...
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Agustin Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 6:34 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Watt Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 12:34 AM
Iza, this is a lovely tribute to your very special grandmother, may she rest in peace. My deep sympathy for your loss. I welcome you to Poetry Soup and hope you find it a warm and welcoming community in which to thrive ~ John
Inman Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 9:51 AM
So sad Iza, your poem relays the beauty of your relationship with your Grandmother. I feel your sadness.
Costa Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 11:08 AM
James, sweet words comfort the heart, I thank you. The longing is eternal ... grandma was so wonderful. God bless you.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 10:21 PM
Ah a heartfelt tribute to a beloved grandmother.
Costa Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 12:29 AM
19 days ago my grandmother went to live in heaven ... thank you my dear, for the words. God bless you
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