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My Request To God

I think of you and I can hear your voice in paradise ... grandma talk to god to come back one more time ... until my day comes. I want to be the girl who played in the room and I ran into your arms. Talk to God that I will be obedient, a good girl just to have you again with me. This is not a letter because you never learned to read with his eyes ... You always read with your beautiful heart, my grandmother and foster mother. I know that God will understand me ... I always I will love you my princess with white hair. I'll wait for you sitting in our old chair ...

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Date: 3/28/2024 6:34:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 6/21/2020 12:34:00 AM
Iza, this is a lovely tribute to your very special grandmother, may she rest in peace. My deep sympathy for your loss. I welcome you to Poetry Soup and hope you find it a warm and welcoming community in which to thrive ~ John
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Date: 6/20/2020 9:51:00 AM
So sad Iza, your poem relays the beauty of your relationship with your Grandmother. I feel your sadness.
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Iza Costa
Date: 6/20/2020 11:08:00 AM
James, sweet words comfort the heart, I thank you. The longing is eternal ... grandma was so wonderful. God bless you.
Date: 6/15/2020 10:21:00 PM
Ah a heartfelt tribute to a beloved grandmother.
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Iza Costa
Date: 6/16/2020 12:29:00 AM
19 days ago my grandmother went to live in heaven ... thank you my dear, for the words. God bless you

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