My Red Rose

Your softness speaks,
stories untold.
In my garden far,
the wind sings your fragrance.

Every drop of dew that falls on you,
spreads a language of its own.
Deep in your heart, burns a light of love,
“Red” is it?........yes red it is my love.

Even beyond the rainbow of imagination,
a poet sings your praise,
a lover longs for you .
It’s true that life has learnt,
the language of love from you.



.....When I fell in love :)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 4:49 PM
this is gorgeous and shows your deep passionate love!
Patnaik Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 8:36 PM
Thank you so much Andrea.
A   Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 8:10 PM
"an awesome win. always & forever *LINDA"
Patnaik Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 8:16 PM
Than you so much.
A  Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 7:09 PM
Bidhu, Congratulations, glad you decided to enter this free verse in my contest. :-) love ~ SKAT~
Patnaik Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 7:52 PM
Thank you so much for having chosen my poem worthy enough among such great poetry.
Andresen Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 1:28 PM
-I really like it, beautiful poem Bidhu! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Patnaik Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 8:37 PM
Thank you so much Anne !
Posey Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 4:48 AM
I am really partial to tributes to roses. This is a lovely one. You might want to read "A Rose That Never Fades" written some years ago for my wife.... Jake
Patnaik Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 8:45 PM
Thank you so much Sir, I will be there.
Ryerson Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 3:27 AM
Perfect love poem here, Bidhu...She must be a wonderful lady indeed to inspire such beautiful lines from your pen...Looking forward to reading more of your fine poetry - Tim
Patnaik Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 9:38 PM
Thank you so much Sir.
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