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My Red Rose

Your softness speaks, stories untold. In my garden far, the wind sings your fragrance. Every drop of dew that falls on you, spreads a language of its own. Deep in your heart, burns a light of love, “Red” is it?........yes red it is my love. Even beyond the rainbow of imagination, a poet sings your praise, a lover longs for you . It’s true that life has learnt, the language of love from you. .....When I fell in love :)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2013 4:49:00 PM

this is gorgeous and shows your deep passionate love!

Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 7/31/2013 8:36:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2013 8:10:00 PM

"an awesome win. always & forever *LINDA"

Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 7/15/2013 8:16:00 PM

Than you so much.

Skat A

Date: 7/15/2013 7:09:00 PM

Bidhu, Congratulations, glad you decided to enter this free verse in my contest. :-) love ~ SKAT~

Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 7/15/2013 7:52:00 PM

Thank you so much for having chosen my poem worthy enough among such great poetry.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/12/2013 1:28:00 PM

-I really like it, beautiful poem Bidhu! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 7/31/2013 8:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne !

John Posey

Date: 7/12/2013 4:48:00 AM

I am really partial to tributes to roses. This is a lovely one. You might want to read "A Rose That Never Fades" written some years ago for my wife.... Jake

Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 7/31/2013 8:45:00 PM

Thank you so much Sir, I will be there.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/12/2013 3:27:00 AM

Perfect love poem here, Bidhu...She must be a wonderful lady indeed to inspire such beautiful lines from your pen...Looking forward to reading more of your fine poetry - Tim

Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 7/31/2013 9:38:00 PM

Thank you so much Sir.