My Red Bike and Me

I learned on a relic...quite bent out of shape, 
          rusty and dented..... and not even quaint!..,
An rattle-trap, hand-me-down, that had seen better days
A ten year old's wishes, had faded away....

But, then on my birthday, as I opened my eyes...
There sat a beauty, my birthday surprise
My very first bike.....shiny and red!!
My dreams had come true.....as I jumped out of bed!!!

I tore off the ribbon, to take a good look
No time now, for breakfast, no time now, to groom
I jumped into my clothes, and then burst from the room
Onto the sidewalk, and into the street
Shouting to everyone..  "Will you come, look at me??!!!"


    With legs long and tan, I began peddling fast
      The sun hid it's shine, the cold wind was brash
        Breeze blew through my hair and into my face
          With time on my side, I was winning a race!
            We were sailing along, I could hear the wheels spin
              Over the hills, where often I'd been!

Clutching the handles, pumping my knees
  I flew past the graveyard, as I peddled with ease
   Far down the lane that circles the fields
     With rows of tall corn stalks, all waiting to yield
       Passing the warehouse that sold Daddy's seed
         I flew past the postman, and the church near the square!
          A turn 'round the corner, the train depot there!
            Splashing through puddles along the bumpy old track
              My legs kept on peddling......with no looking back!!

Didn't notice the dark clouds or storm in the sky
 The air was so sweet as I held my arms high
   Was I dreaming?  I didn't care...as I glided in time
     All the happiness I felt, all the joy of that I ride!
       I remember that birthday....that's been hidden inside..
         Look at me!!  Look at me!! On my red bike, it's me!!
           Don't you see??!!! Don't you see!!! ... That young girl was me!!
             Like a clock that's unwinding..!! That is me that you see!!
               I remember....I remember....How happy and free
                As those wheels spin beneath me
                 Look at me !!!!!!!!!  Do you see??
                   Free as a bird....it is me, it is me!!!
                          Wheeeeeeeee!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/21/2012 3:53:00 PM
Carrie, wheeeee!! all the way home, a super nice win;-) Congratulations with your bicycle entry. Have a nice day~PD
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Date: 5/18/2012 4:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "My Bicycle" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2012 9:27:00 AM
The energy in this was outstanding and loved the way u described where u were riding as you were riding along! Such a fun entry!
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Date: 5/18/2012 9:29:00 AM
A hearty congratulations to you, CARRIE!
Date: 5/18/2012 8:32:00 AM
I love the way you put this together! Excellent!
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Date: 5/18/2012 4:45:00 AM
you've really captured the joy and excitement of getting a new bike in a wonderful way. congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/18/2012 2:07:00 AM
Lovely Carrie, I can picture you now riding past your daddy's place legs off the peddles rolling along. Congratulations xx
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Date: 5/18/2012 1:27:00 AM
Carrie congrats on your free as a bird win..David
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Date: 5/17/2012 8:36:00 PM
This is utterly delightful and descriptive, naturally. Another congrats for you tonight, Carrie.
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Date: 5/17/2012 8:26:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/28/2010 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Joe Flach's contest "First Time". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/22/2010 7:46:00 PM
Such a joyful write. Gosh, I see all these unique entries here: first bike, first poetry write, first look at the in-laws. Why the heck did I do such an ordinary one. I have no imagination. hahaha lUv, andrea
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Date: 6/21/2010 2:07:00 AM
Such a joyful poem- smiled all the way through it Congrats Sweetieeeeeeee!!!
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Date: 6/20/2010 2:22:00 PM
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Date: 6/19/2010 8:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your 3rd Place win in the contest, with this delightful write, Carrie..a memorable time, indeed! Love, audrey
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Date: 6/19/2010 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joe Flach's contest "First Time" Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2010 6:54:00 PM
Carrie, this was a very fun and entertaining read. Lovely story and so well written. Thanks for entering it in my contest and making my first time a joy. Joe
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Date: 6/18/2010 6:18:00 PM
Wow wonderful poem- so many memories come to my mind-Thanks for taking me back! Congrats on your win!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/18/2010 5:28:00 PM
A wonderfujl poem and experience. I cans see the happiness of that little girl and your folks must thave felt so pleased to see how happy it made you. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/18/2010 4:42:00 PM
I must say.....for me....you would have tied #1..I love it but then we do have a mutual admiration society aye? HUGS
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Date: 6/18/2010 3:04:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Joe's contest.. another wonderful write and win for u to enjoy .. sweet smell of success and victory.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/13/2009 1:26:00 AM
I just love it. Congratulations on placing in Christie Reynolds Fabulous Fantasy contest.
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Date: 4/5/2009 1:03:00 PM
Hello my dear sweet Carrie! Sorry this is so late, but as you well know I've been a little busy! Warmest congrats on your win in Christie's contest! This poem brings me back to carefree days of youthful joy! A real fantasy for now for sure! Love & hugs, Shar
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Date: 4/4/2009 11:42:00 PM
Carrie - Congratulations on your H.M. in Christies Contest – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 4/4/2009 8:57:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Christie's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/4/2009 12:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your fantastic poem and well deserved win in Christie's excellent contest.
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