My Reason

At times the cracks within our souls Are placed there for a simple reason Our lives possess certain goals Just assuredly as each of the seasons So we can find the one who seals the cracks Who molds us back into an unembellished form To be there for us picking up what we lack Becoming our thunder in every brainstorm That one person who completes us The light that shines in our night skies The one who gives us undying love When our soul cries the one that replies To finish each of our incomplete sentences There for us when we become defective Knowing each of our own preferences Even to know what is our perspective 12/12/2020 Sponsor Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Sand Blown

Date: 2/22/2021 2:11:00 PM

...very nice write...andt some cracks exist because that's how the light gets in....so the filler should be transparent....stan sand

Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/24/2021 1:41:00 PM

Thank you I appreciate your take on it!:)

John Hamilton

Date: 1/10/2021 5:16:00 PM

A beautiful write Brenda as per usual.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/12/2021 1:21:00 AM

Thank you John!:)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/26/2020 6:41:00 PM

Brenda, Your reason is a beautiful one. And the cracks., just a nice touch in perfection. Don't ever let them take that away. -Richard

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/4/2021 12:25:00 AM

Richard I’m so glad you liked it! Thank you!;)

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/25/2020 3:08:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. Cheering you with blest Christmas spirit, while sharing you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/4/2021 12:25:00 AM

Beata thank you!;)

John Fleming

Date: 12/24/2020 12:09:00 PM

Very ably composed, Poetess...an endearing and heartfelt, nicely rhyming poem. Enjoyed! :) john P.s Merry Christmas!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/4/2021 12:25:00 AM

John you are too kind to me thank you!:)

John Gondolf

Date: 12/15/2020 2:15:00 AM

Lucky are those who have someone to seal the cracks in their soul. Nicely written Bren, happy holidays. Hugs.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/4/2021 12:24:00 AM

John so glad to see you still here! Thank you!;)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/14/2020 7:16:00 PM

Back to Congratulate you :) Again - may God B L E S S you always

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/4/2021 12:24:00 AM

Thanks Gina!:)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 12/14/2020 2:26:00 PM

When such a rare person comes along, hold on tight! Excellent write, Brenda:-)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/4/2021 12:24:00 AM

So true! Thank you!:)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/13/2020 4:43:00 PM

A special wish for a special person... I must say, personally, that I'm glad I never aimed my arrows that high, for I've surely never found anyone as special as the one you've written about. ~ Remarried and happy though! :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/4/2021 12:23:00 AM

Thank you gershon!;)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/13/2020 4:32:00 AM

I N S P I R I N G - Love this. God bless you sweet friend

Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/13/2020 3:33:00 PM

Regina thank you so much!:)