My Reality

I sit, eyes open to this portrayal of reality. I wish to reveal my true self, so I look out And witness the sights broken with a fine brutality By those chosen to keep us safe- happy tragedy. But seeing without Does not reveal within.

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Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 1/2/2013 9:30:00 AM

Well penned Evan! That which is within is often layered and difficult to perceive and reveal. Have a beautiful year!

Evan Thomas
Date: 1/3/2013 8:59:00 PM

Thanks! Have a wonderful year also!

Richard Palmer

Date: 1/1/2013 9:19:00 AM

great write Evan,welcome to the Soup,enjoy yourself to the fullest and have a prosperous 2013

Evan Thomas
Date: 1/1/2013 10:14:00 AM

Thank you very much! Have a prosperous and fun 2013!