My Raspberry

Soft edible fruits,
My love,
Time to get you fit,
Juice your fruits,
My darling
Be healthy
Squeeze,
That’s the trick
Succulently tender,
Press firmly,
Ready!
In a shake,
Fill your glass,
Rich in red flavor,
Kissing your
Palate plate,
Tenderly 
Extracting,
Picking 
From the bush,
Raspberries
Seriously
Extremely,
Deliciously,
Good. 

19/02/2017
Wendy Jae
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dome Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 12:50 PM
Very good well written Pete. Very fruity.
Rycroft Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 12:59 PM
Thank you Peter
Ball Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 10:31 PM
Yummm! Berries are always so much sweeter when you eat them right off the bush. Great job. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB
Rycroft Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 1:00 PM
Thank you Judy
Smith Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 7:32 PM
Tasty Wendy...
Rycroft Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 8:10 PM
Thank you Charles amended mistake x
Turner Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 5:50 PM
Yummm with three m's:) Sounds delicious, Mrs Wendy:)
Rycroft Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 8:13 PM
Eat straight from the tree if you want x
Turner Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 7:26 PM
How about whipping me up a raspberry smoothie:)
Rycroft Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Hi Daniel I've updated it better now check it out and thank you for reading x
Allison Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 3:38 PM
My favourite fruit Wendy I loved your fruit poem:-) hugs jan xx
Rycroft Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 3:52 PM
Yes x I'm enjoying the flowers and fruits theme x some more to come I think x trying to keep the clean lol
Rycroft Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 3:50 PM
Thank you Jan xxx
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February 19, 2017 at 2:52 PM
- Juicy, fresh and healthy ... lovely written, Wendy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rycroft Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 3:03 PM
Thank you Sunshine x wish I could have more healthy fruits x
Smith Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 2:47 PM
I'll take a glass please...delightful Wendy
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February 19, 2017 at 3:05 PM
Come over yours is waiting I have saved a glass x
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