My Quiet Place -This Mellow August Night

I was right in the middle of commenting to peers at Poetry Soup when the power went off and I found myself in utter darkness and feeling disappointed since it was still only 10:45, a time much too early for night owls like myself. After groping my way upstairs in the dark, I have managed to locate my pen and paper (can’t even find a flashlight!) and here I sit out on my porch step using the little light of a nearly moonless night and of my trusty cell phone.  The sound of crickets around me is large! Their chirping fills up the silence, and there's the faint sound of dogs barking in the distance. Even at this late hour, I can hear cars zooming down streets several blocks away, but all of that is overridden by the crickets and the wind rustling leaves on nearby trees. Cooled by the night breeze and feeling undaunted, I begin to work on my little poem.

This Mellow August Night

Out here as I sit on my porch,
cooled by a summer breeze,
I’m soothed by the rustling sound of
leaves on the nearby trees.

The chorus of crickets I hear
chiming in as I write
is a lullaby without end
this mellow August night.

Aug. 17, 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Seal Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 9:53 PM
Ok Petal, No new poem, is my turn to badger you for a change lol. Yeah I know, I have all this back catalogue to get through but I enjoyed the moment while it lasted, as much as I've enjoyed this quiet moment on your porch. Take care, Richard
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 4:47 AM
Sounds like you made the most of your night and you got a lovely poem out of it too. Congrats on your special win Andrea.
Brown Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 11:32 AM
I am finally able to comment on your win in Sara's "My Quiet Place" contest. Congratulations Andrea. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 11:44 AM
andie, so slow these days with my greetings; i nned snooze time.. belated congrats on your special win..:) huggs!
Wellington Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 7:30 PM
Andrea, you almost put me to sleep with this sweet lullaby. A great write and a great win. Congrats. One love. Joy Wells
A   Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 10:34 AM
ANDREA, , congratulations with your wonderful win in SARA'S sweet " Quiet Place " contest.. have a nice day~ PD
Sweetheart Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 10:29 AM
way to go .. another first place win for an elegant write on your special quiet place my friend .. from the poems I've read this morning this is indeed a great area for u to create your magical words luv ..
Kendrick Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 8:28 AM
I had this to happen a couple of times with the electricity going off and I wrote some by candle light..It made me give more honor to those who had to do school work by lamp or candle light..Enjoyed reading your work..Congrats on your placement in my contest..Thanks for entering it..Sara
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 5:53 AM
Congratulations on your win Andy could do with a warm mellow night , well done. xx
Babcock Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 3:08 PM
I had to laugh at this one as the kids were down last weekend and we had a cricket chirping downstairs. I found it the next day and no more cricket.So the poor sucker will not lullaby no one. Cute poem . Love Phyl
Gasun Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 8:07 PM
ops! i almost have missed this one and it is so beautiful, Andrea. yes, it's a bit same with mine. i sit also on the porch. thank you again for your comment my dear. Good luck and BEST WISHES ALWAYS! Have a blessed weekend! luv, leonora
May Avatar
August 26, 2012 at 12:54 PM
very nice Andrea...I love it...best wishes...love...Joseph
Pettit Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 12:32 PM
A great narrative and rhyming poem to follow. Looks like a good competitor for the contest.
Devnath  Avatar
August 24, 2012 at 10:30 AM
Genius poem of Mellow August night of quiet moments. Loved always, bl
Parker Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 11:07 PM
A soothing, country diddy! You were definitely in the moment when you wrote this verse! When artificial accoutrements fade away, we are left with the rythmic cadence of nature! Oh, by the way, thanks for your sweet comments on my recent haiku, Dessicated Autumn Leaves.
Bauer Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 6:16 PM
hey andrea! really nice poem! i was amused by your explanation (sorry about the power, though) because the other night i was kept awake most of the night by crickets and i plan to write a poem about how obnoxious they seemed to me! glad you enjoyed their chorus, though!
Johnson Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 4:26 PM
Boy! Your hardcore. :) And we are all very glad. To share that night that dimmed the light to show what was in store.
Horsman Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 3:36 PM
Thank you power cut, see what happens, when the Utah Lady is left in the dark. a wow factor off the Richter scale. one hopes your poems will be without end also.
Wesley Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 2:54 PM
You have a wellspring of thought that never fails to give the reader a moment we never knew we were missing I can see you sitting there weaving this tiny gem together in the dark. Nothing can stop you, Love, Elizabeth
Onclaud Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 12:27 PM
will you please stop leaving me breathless, andie? ( lol).. i need oxygen!... this has a natural stroke of grace; i think you need more brownouts!... wow..:) huggs!
Poet Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 11:41 AM
Khub bhalo kobita......
B Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 10:59 AM
Mrs. Andrea, a beautiful description of a lovely night. You painted this relaxation of the mind beautifully, but at the same time there is so much energy here, very peaceful energy. Thank you for sharing.
Austin Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 10:33 AM
MELLOOOOOOW, yes, that's the word for this little jewel. Love, daver
Andresen Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 8:47 AM
Evening was quiet....and you could listen, lovely poem Andrea. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Horne Avatar
August 23, 2012 at 8:40 AM
truly beautiful write, my friend - your descriptions are so vivid : )
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