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My Prudent Boy

We missed you my sweetheart many years away from us You left when you were twelve Now look at you!! You have grown like a tree. Here you are more handsome Educated to the highest level You went overseas to get education I am proud of you my love You are going to lift this family We are proud of you. Go to the courts my love Rule with justice without haste Let the sky be your limit Do not listen to bad people Work with zeal my love Never give up to the end. By Vincent Omondi

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/28/2024 8:39:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/24/2016 6:26:00 PM

Vincent, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/4/2016 12:12:00 AM

vincent omondi, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**

Vincent Omondi

Date: 12/27/2011 2:13:00 AM

Thank you very much for your comments

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/24/2011 8:06:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Vincent. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Vincent Omondi
Date: 12/27/2011 2:14:00 AM

I really appreciate for your comment a bout my poem