Vincent Omondi Poet Alliteration

My Prudent Boy

We missed you my sweetheart
many years away from us
You left when you were twelve
Now look at you!!
You have grown like a tree.



Here you are more handsome
Educated to the highest level
You went overseas to get education
I am proud of you my love
You are going to lift this family
We are proud of you.


Go to the courts my love
Rule with justice without haste
Let the sky be your limit
Do not listen to bad people
Work with zeal my love
Never give up to the end.

By Vincent Omondi

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Beata Agustin October 28, 2024 at 8:39 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 24, 2016 at 6:26 PM Vincent, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A January 4, 2016 at 12:12 AM vincent omondi, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**

Vincent Omondi December 27, 2011 at 2:13 AM Thank you very much for your comments

Carol Sunshine Brown December 24, 2011 at 8:06 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Vincent. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol Vincent Omondi December 27, 2011 at 2:14 AM I really appreciate for your comment a bout my poem