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My Proverb

My own proverb.....   

'There is a difference between love and lust. If you choose love first, then it will make you feel more beautiful. But, if you choose lust first then your love is gone waste'      

- Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 5, 2015 at 2:30 AM

Ravi, wisdom always shine in each of your poem!~Olive Eloisa thanks for sharing!

Kelly Deschler

May 2, 2015 at 6:43 PM

Love comes from the heart and it is the only thing that can last forever... You've penned great words of wisdom here, Ravi. Well done!

Len Gasun

April 11, 2015 at 12:06 PM

This is absolutely true my dear friend, Ravi. This is a great write and haiku which I loved and enjoyed to read tonight. Thank you so much for sharing! Blessings to you! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Ravi Sathasivam

April 16, 2015 at 2:49 AM

Thanks for your comment on my proverb my dear friend. Appreciated. Hugs.

M. L. Kiser

April 10, 2015 at 5:03 PM

Nicely summed message, in this Haiku.

Ravi Sathasivam

April 16, 2015 at 2:50 AM

Thanks for your comment on my proverb my dear friend. Appreciated. Hugs.

Fatima Nusairat

April 9, 2015 at 9:15 PM

Yes indeed:) I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, thanks for sharing ,and for visiting my page, much appreciated. Fatima

Ravi Sathasivam

April 16, 2015 at 2:50 AM

Thanks for your comment on my proverb my dear friend. Appreciated.

Tim Smith

April 8, 2015 at 8:55 PM

Very true Ravi...we should always look for love first a7....Tim

Ravi Sathasivam

April 16, 2015 at 2:51 AM

Thanks for your comment on my proverb my friend. Appreciated.

Paul Callus

April 8, 2015 at 2:24 PM

A wise and lovely proverb, Ravi. Lust is fire of straw...love is a continuous flame. All the best. // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

April 16, 2015 at 2:51 AM

Thanks for your comment on my proverb my friend. Appreciated.

Kamran Rashid

April 8, 2015 at 9:57 AM

it is true and i belive like love is walking with soul in heaven and lust makes it all like hell,,c the world here,,lust of money,,power and wisdom...it is like ruining a garden and i hope to read more good PROVERBS ..#thankyou for reading and understanding my thought####wishing you great ,,rock As u WalK

Ravi Sathasivam

April 16, 2015 at 2:52 AM

Thanks for your comment on my proverb my friend. Appreciated.