My Promotion

Last week I barely had the notion That today would cause commotion Our team has such harmonic motion But after years of my devotion I tell you all with high emotion That I received a new promotion **BITE SIZE POEM no24 Contest

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Edward Ebbs

Date: 10/27/2021 7:59:00 PM

Happy you are at a high emotion with your promotion. Congrats! ~ Ed

Avery Won
Date: 10/28/2021 4:34:00 AM

Thank you Ed :)

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 10/27/2021 12:59:00 PM

Great write....you tell an abundant story without droning on and on! Love it! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Paulette

Avery Won
Date: 10/27/2021 1:00:00 PM

Thanks Paulette!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/27/2021 11:18:00 AM

Wow! Such great and glad news is expressed in four lines with splendor! Congratulations!

Avery Won
Date: 10/27/2021 11:55:00 AM

Thank you!!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/27/2021 10:14:00 AM

Congrats of elation for this presentation on this special occasion - a goal of realization feeling your jubilation! Fun Avery! Congratulations!

Avery Won
Date: 10/27/2021 11:55:00 AM

I think all comments should be in monorhyme now. It'll make life more interesting :) Thank you!

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 10/27/2021 8:29:00 AM

What a monorhyme!! congrats on this occasion!! hope it fills you with elation!! Well done! good fun!!

Avery Won
Date: 10/27/2021 9:23:00 AM

Haha keeping the monorhyme going :) Thanks!

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/27/2021 7:55:00 AM

Fun poem ~ enjoyed your monorhyme scheme

Avery Won
Date: 10/27/2021 9:23:00 AM

Thank you so much!!