Avery Won Poet Rhyme

My Promotion

Last week I barely had the notion
That today would cause commotion
Our team has such harmonic motion
But after years of my devotion
I tell you all with high emotion
That I received a new promotion



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Edward Ebbs October 27, 2021 at 7:59 PM Happy you are at a high emotion with your promotion. Congrats! ~ Ed Avery Won October 28, 2021 at 4:34 AM Thank you Ed :)

Paulette Calasibetta October 27, 2021 at 12:59 PM Great write....you tell an abundant story without droning on and on! Love it! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Paulette Avery Won October 27, 2021 at 1:00 PM Thanks Paulette!

Christuraj Alex October 27, 2021 at 11:18 AM Wow! Such great and glad news is expressed in four lines with splendor! Congratulations! Avery Won October 27, 2021 at 11:55 AM Thank you!!

Sam Kauffman October 27, 2021 at 10:14 AM Congrats of elation for this presentation on this special occasion - a goal of realization feeling your jubilation! Fun Avery! Congratulations! Avery Won October 27, 2021 at 11:55 AM I think all comments should be in monorhyme now. It'll make life more interesting :) Thank you!

Krish Radhakrishna October 27, 2021 at 8:29 AM What a monorhyme!! congrats on this occasion!! hope it fills you with elation!! Well done! good fun!! Avery Won October 27, 2021 at 9:23 AM Haha keeping the monorhyme going :) Thanks!

Line Gauthier October 27, 2021 at 7:55 AM Fun poem ~ enjoyed your monorhyme scheme Avery Won October 27, 2021 at 9:23 AM Thank you so much!!