Avery Won | + Follow Poet |
Rhyme | + Fav Poem | Comment | Email | Print |

My Promotion

Last week I barely had the notion
That today would cause commotion
Our team has such harmonic motion
But after years of my devotion
I tell you all with high emotion
That I received a new promotion



**BITE SIZE POEM no24 Contest

Copyright © Avery Won | Year Posted 2021

Please Login to post a comment

Edward Ebbs Date: 10/27/2021 7:59:00 PM Happy you are at a high emotion with your promotion. Congrats! ~ Ed Login to Reply Avery Won Date: 10/28/2021 4:34:00 AM Thank you Ed :)

Paulette Calasibetta Date: 10/27/2021 12:59:00 PM Great write....you tell an abundant story without droning on and on! Love it! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Paulette Login to Reply Avery Won Date: 10/27/2021 1:00:00 PM Thanks Paulette!

Christuraj Alex Date: 10/27/2021 11:18:00 AM Wow! Such great and glad news is expressed in four lines with splendor! Congratulations! Login to Reply Avery Won Date: 10/27/2021 11:55:00 AM Thank you!!

Sam Kauffman Date: 10/27/2021 10:14:00 AM Congrats of elation for this presentation on this special occasion - a goal of realization feeling your jubilation! Fun Avery! Congratulations! Login to Reply Avery Won Date: 10/27/2021 11:55:00 AM I think all comments should be in monorhyme now. It'll make life more interesting :) Thank you!

Krish Radhakrishna Date: 10/27/2021 8:29:00 AM What a monorhyme!! congrats on this occasion!! hope it fills you with elation!! Well done! good fun!! Login to Reply Avery Won Date: 10/27/2021 9:23:00 AM Haha keeping the monorhyme going :) Thanks!

Line Gauthier Date: 10/27/2021 7:55:00 AM Fun poem ~ enjoyed your monorhyme scheme Login to Reply Avery Won Date: 10/27/2021 9:23:00 AM Thank you so much!!