My Prayer

If I could
 go back a moment,
in spite the torment,
not forgetting the judgment,
 that was insultment.
 
if I could,
teleport a distance,
stop the circumstance,
without disturbance,
thou now has no importance.

if I could,
have stayed silent,
gain no talent,
but with that target,
id lather post a ballet.

if I could,
please the crowd,
gain a crown,
stand out proud
I wouldn't please God.

if I could
have stayed silent,
make people unite,
putting differences apart,
spreading peace and trust,
it's all am praying for atlast..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 12:00 PM
Nicely done, Eldah. Hugs Eve ~`*
Robinson Jr. Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 8:35 AM
Beautiful prayer poem, Eldah! Such a spiritually uplifting debut poem. I welcome you, like the other talented poets/poetesses did, to PSoup. Look forward to reading more of your fine poetry. This was a very heartfelt spiritual write. Aurora bright poetry. May love light your path always.
Lee Sr. Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 6:32 AM
Welcome to the Soup Eldah, If I could save the world, with just one word; I'd use every letter in the alphabet; yet I would pray to our God in heaven for His blessings; And...witness His glorious message to His children...beautiful verse my friend keep writing. Blessings --James
R. V. Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 6:45 PM
If I could find words to compliment you, Eldah...
Klugman Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 7:17 AM
Hi, Eldah! You, new on this site, like I,M. With regards. Alex
Kweka Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 6:19 AM
i simply adore this poem keep em coming eldah love you overrrr
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