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If I could go back a moment, in spite the torment, not forgetting the judgment, that was insultment. if I could, teleport a distance, stop the circumstance, without disturbance, thou now has no importance. if I could, have stayed silent, gain no talent, but with that target, id lather post a ballet. if I could, please the crowd, gain a crown, stand out proud I wouldn't please God. if I could have stayed silent, make people unite, putting differences apart, spreading peace and trust, it's all am praying for atlast..

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Date: 12/19/2017 12:00:00 PM
Nicely done, Eldah. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/14/2017 8:35:00 AM
Beautiful prayer poem, Eldah! Such a spiritually uplifting debut poem. I welcome you, like the other talented poets/poetesses did, to PSoup. Look forward to reading more of your fine poetry. This was a very heartfelt spiritual write. Aurora bright poetry. May love light your path always.
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Date: 11/27/2017 6:32:00 AM
Welcome to the Soup Eldah, If I could save the world, with just one word; I'd use every letter in the alphabet; yet I would pray to our God in heaven for His blessings; And...witness His glorious message to His children...beautiful verse my friend keep writing. Blessings --James
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Date: 11/22/2017 6:45:00 PM
If I could find words to compliment you, Eldah...
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Date: 11/14/2017 7:17:00 AM
Hi, Eldah! You, new on this site, like I,M. With regards. Alex
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Date: 11/10/2017 6:19:00 AM
i simply adore this poem keep em coming eldah love you overrrr
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