My Poetry Line

My Poetry Line

Jumbled and sloppy
broken tattered and choppy
Yet, you are mine

Random revels revealed 
disfigured 
characters
concealed
Still, you are mine

Scattered moments
thoughts of the day
things remembered
and things to pray
reflective art penned
Blue
Black
or Grey
memories forever on display
Yes, you are mine 

Your canvas has many forms
computer, napkin
blank, lined, or torn

Your beauty shines 
Though... you make no sense sometimes
Still, you are mine
My poetry line 

Lay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/4/2011 6:35:00 AM
Smile, *^_^* Again, I find such loveliness amid this flowing sweetly verse my dear, Walayee. = I can almost feel its colours reflecting from the canvas once more painted in pretty, towards the view it seems of poetry and perhaps even another or others, seeping into my own depths and playing its beautiful tune. == You are very gifted and quite lovely my dear. === love, jasper
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Date: 3/29/2011 8:25:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today as always Lay. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/28/2011 8:21:00 PM
like this, i find taking words at random sometimes works, from all what you have written here, Lay, really love this concept, this imagery. Harry
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Date: 3/28/2011 7:27:00 PM
I really like this one Lay, (so true to form)& certainly not (other peoples norm) a 7
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