My Poetry King

My poetry king
Such joy you bring

                    In your silk white shroud
I hear your words loud

  
You say: "Don't wait for me."
Hey buster, it is plain to see You are the one who makes me happy I am a fragile flower, you are my bumble bee I will wait an eternity I am no poet my words so plain and in the sadness of the heavy rain I will keep you afloat on our love train and we can fly like an aeroplane. I am the dance You are the music You are the beat I am the rhythm. I am a mineral desiring those healing crystal eyes Your first hello from all those goodbyes My love for you has no time limit We are fireflies burning each minute I will always wait End of DEBATE
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Brewer Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 1:52 AM
Wow, i just wrote poem similar to yours!! Great minds must think alike! ??
Roper Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 5:32 PM
love your strong words of taking a stand for your mate... Beautiful...
Morris  Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 4:46 PM
I like that poem a lot.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 5:23 PM
He is your Muse, you are the flow of words.. He is your knight, you are the Beauty awaiting the enchanting spell! Impressive write, a realm of Love and life! I like your write.. Shine and stay blessed Yazmin.
Ajmal Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Hi Yazmin, really enjoyed reading this poem of yours, you are a gifted poet and all of your poems are really nice, a really beautiful poem this is, good luck and continue to write
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 4:43 PM
We desire to become whatever is needed for love of our life. Beautiful. bb
Thomas Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 5:20 PM
A solid end to the debate! Beautiful Yazmin!
Morris  Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 4:47 PM
Agreed
Lamoureux Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 7:54 AM
There can be no doubt, you are indeed a poet. I am impressed.
S     Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 2:32 PM
You bare your heart with sincere beauty, Yazmin! And you are most certainly a poet :) ~Judy
Gentile Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 2:59 PM
And love IS worth waiting for, Yazmin! I really enjoyed your romance !!!
Teagan Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 9:28 AM
Love this passionite write, especially that ending! Pow! :D
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 10:55 PM
This is fantastic Yazmin! Thoroughly enjoyed. xomo!
Ashley Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 4:32 PM
Yasmin, your poetic lines of romantic yearning are full of exquisite enchantment, there is a magical and airy quality to your endearing expressions of your love and devotion.. An excellent poem that I completely enjoyed..
Pandit Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 3:41 PM
Excellent Yazmin..so romantic..enjoyed reading it.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 3:26 PM
Endearing and emphatic love shout out, Yazmin! I feel you on this cool romantic write. Thoughtful, expressive poetry which shines from the heart. Love and more love always.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 2:52 PM
I did not pass Go. I did not collect $200 but this grabbed my heart, and went straight to FAVs list.
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