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My Poetry King

My poetry king Such joy you bring In your silk white shroud I hear your words loud You say: "Don't wait for me." Hey buster, it is plain to see You are the one who makes me happy I am a fragile flower, you are my bumble bee I will wait an eternity I am no poet my words so plain and in the sadness of the heavy rain I will keep you afloat on our love train and we can fly like an aeroplane. I am the dance You are the music You are the beat I am the rhythm. I am a mineral desiring those healing crystal eyes Your first hello from all those goodbyes My love for you has no time limit We are fireflies burning each minute I will always wait End of DEBATE

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Diane Brewer

Date: 6/7/2018 1:52:00 AM

Wow, i just wrote poem similar to yours!! Great minds must think alike! ??

Eve Roper

Date: 6/6/2018 5:32:00 PM

love your strong words of taking a stand for your mate... Beautiful...

Mark Morris

Date: 6/6/2018 4:46:00 PM

I like that poem a lot.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/21/2018 5:23:00 PM

He is your Muse, you are the flow of words.. He is your knight, you are the Beauty awaiting the enchanting spell! Impressive write, a realm of Love and life! I like your write.. Shine and stay blessed Yazmin.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 5/5/2018 12:40:00 PM

Hi Yazmin, really enjoyed reading this poem of yours, you are a gifted poet and all of your poems are really nice, a really beautiful poem this is, good luck and continue to write

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 4/26/2018 4:43:00 PM

We desire to become whatever is needed for love of our life. Beautiful. bb

Fj Thomas

Date: 4/19/2018 5:20:00 PM

A solid end to the debate! Beautiful Yazmin!

Mark Morris
Date: 6/6/2018 4:47:00 PM

Agreed

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/18/2018 7:54:00 AM

There can be no doubt, you are indeed a poet. I am impressed.

Judith S

Date: 4/11/2018 2:32:00 PM

You bare your heart with sincere beauty, Yazmin! And you are most certainly a poet :) ~Judy

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/10/2018 2:59:00 PM

And love IS worth waiting for, Yazmin! I really enjoyed your romance !!!

Becca Teagan

Date: 4/10/2018 9:28:00 AM

Love this passionite write, especially that ending! Pow! :D

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/9/2018 10:55:00 PM

This is fantastic Yazmin! Thoroughly enjoyed. xomo!

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/9/2018 4:32:00 PM

Yasmin, your poetic lines of romantic yearning are full of exquisite enchantment, there is a magical and airy quality to your endearing expressions of your love and devotion.. An excellent poem that I completely enjoyed..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/9/2018 3:41:00 PM

Excellent Yazmin..so romantic..enjoyed reading it.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 4/9/2018 3:26:00 PM

Endearing and emphatic love shout out, Yazmin! I feel you on this cool romantic write. Thoughtful, expressive poetry which shines from the heart. Love and more love always.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/9/2018 2:52:00 PM

I did not pass Go. I did not collect $200 but this grabbed my heart, and went straight to FAVs list.