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I feel my poems are portraits I try to create a scene I use my words in a fashion To let people know what I mean I try not to bluster or blather I try not to write things inane I want to make the mind smile Or cause the heart to feel pain I like to write about nature I love to speak about love I point out the hells here on Earth And the hopes from Heaven above Aromas and colors excite me They both make me close my eyes I lay back and savor their flavor Then grab my pen when I rise Thoughts are constantly spinning Around inside of my brain I try my best just to sort them And put them down in refrain I could go on about feelings But this poem must come to an end So I hope those reading my writing Will be my poetry friends Rockman :-)

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Date: 7/9/2011 12:58:00 PM
I digg your stuff I think you got clout I bet you'd show most of these jokers what writing's all about! ...no doubt ...I'm out!
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Date: 7/8/2011 10:46:00 AM
Your writing is excellent and I enjoy so much.
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Date: 6/26/2011 10:12:00 AM
very well penned
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Date: 6/25/2011 1:17:00 PM
So special, your poems are special and I enjoy reading
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Date: 6/25/2011 8:41:00 AM
You might have a point. I read a lot of the poems, but only comment if I liked the read. It is agonizing to sit and wonder what to say about a poem that you just can't connect with. On the other hand it might be insulting to just leave your name without a comment? i will have to mull over this one, lol
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Date: 6/25/2011 7:45:00 AM
My first read of the day and a very pleasant one indeed. Very well written and so very true in content. Well done. Regards
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Rockman Pritts
Date: 6/25/2011 8:02:00 AM
Thanks Heidie. The purpose of it is to get people to connect. Wether or not you like it, at least put your name out there to be known and solicite more reading. If people don't want to comment, just putting your name in the comment says that you were there and I can search the readers poetry in kind. The more I see the name the more I remember it. :-)

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