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My Poetic Love Affair

Thrusting his knowledge inside , his strong hands hold my hips His thoughts enter into my essence as I kiss his full lips I savor the sweet smell of perception all over his skin As his prophecies penetrate my depths finding solace within I open the secret chambers of my soul, freely allowing him to explore Passionately he places his spiritual goods, behind my guarded doors. I wrap myself around his wisdom, as I invite him inside Eagerly embracing his ego and stroking his pride Down the small of my back inspiration caresses my curves Releasing the desires of his heart and the strength of his words His understanding carefully maneuvers through the maze of my mind Easily navigating the intricacies of my intellect, each and every time. Pressing tightly against each other, inhaling his spirit from the air And I gaze into the eyes of my Poetic Love Affair Chiquita(Chiamaka)Baity ^^^cdi^^^

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/16/2011 2:13:00 AM
Nice rich expression of a love affair with your intellect as you compose your poems. Nice meeting you in poetry soup. Thank you for your comments, they inspire me to write more. Dalila
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Date: 8/5/2011 2:27:00 PM
coming back to this poem has become a mandate, could you explain about it more clearly to me in a letter on face book or poetrysoup? great erotic write.
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Date: 8/5/2011 7:57:00 AM
Very imaginative metaphor ,Chiquita!Hope you have inumerable orgastic poetic moments crowned by sweet moments of clarity!
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Date: 8/5/2011 7:37:00 AM
This one is very unique. I enjoyed the sexual mystique. Your flow is outrageous. Screw worrying about form and terms. Work and write on YOUR OWN TERMS. I just like to sit back and let the pen go wild. The MOMENT the struggle arrives, I put down the writing. The effortless stuff always is the best. Contrived equals SUCK. Take a look at the guy Rockman who commented on this poem. He has some really good stuff. This one poem he did about a homeless guy is OFF the HOOK! Keep in touch. 7 Rate & Fave
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Date: 8/4/2011 11:36:00 AM
Chiquita, I wanted to thank you for commenting on one of my poems earlier. Your comment encouraged me to check some of your work and I find this one well, frankly, mentally, physically and spiritually uplifting uplifting. It hits the reader on several different levels and that's what "Real" poetry is all about, IMHO. Thanks for making me think (and getting me a little excited too): Terrell Martin
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Date: 8/4/2011 4:22:00 AM
You have erotically entwined poetry with sex but I'm not sure which direction you were trying to take us. Poetry or sex. Either way, I read it several times. And enjoyed it. May I suggest my poem, "Sweet Love"? Keep up the good work Chiquita. Rockman
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Date: 8/4/2011 1:14:00 AM
Sexy, sexy. Its all i have to say
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Date: 8/3/2011 7:55:00 PM
Chiquita, Great thoughts do flow as on you show, a flair for poetry, sensual visions writhe n glow, as well we know,with deep sincerety... love it babe, xo, Don
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Date: 8/3/2011 9:27:00 AM
Lol the play on words 7up
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Date: 8/2/2011 1:39:00 PM
chiamaka, this poem tells me something quite romantic and interesting about you.
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Date: 8/2/2011 1:14:00 AM
From one lover of words to another. I loved reading your world! Very nice poetic words!!!
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