Ravindra K Kapoor Poet Free verse

My Poem Now a Song Why You Are Standing

Poem cum Song  "Standing So Far Away" -Part 1
Now a Song 'Why You Are Standing So Far Away From Me'
From my Broken Heart Song Series 

You can hear this Song on my You Tube Music channel
RavindraKK1 or by using the URL given below:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hMVDRp91tVA


Why, you are standing 
So far, away from me
As if, we do not,  
Know each other
From too far away
You are, looking at me
Just like a stranger.

Do you, have any remembrance
Of me, and my love,  
Do you remember, those days
When we were, in love,            
When going, away, from me  
Was a shocking thing 
For you
But, today, you are, standing
So far away from me.

Do you still remember    
Sitting, for hours with me  
In the shade of a tree
While, telling to me  
All the love stories 
And telling to me  
That your love for me 
Will be there
Till the eternity.

Why, you are standing 
So far, away from me
As if, we do not,  
Know each other
From too far away
You are, looking   at me
Just like a stranger.

Ravindra
Kanpur India 14th Dec. 2014

NOTE: IF YOU LIFE THE SONG?- PLEASE LEAVE
YOUR COMMENTS ON MY SONG ALSO.
LWB

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Poet Destroyer A April 12, 2015 at 11:28 PM it is quite an amazing yet devastating thing when you are lovers one day than a month later one could act as if you never happened, enjoyed your write. -love,p.d.

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2014 at 11:29 AM Ravindra, I do not have time to go listen to it, but I can imagine your voice and how you would sing it. It is a very good one for the style you use when you sing. Love it! Ravindra K Kapoor December 14, 2014 at 12:46 PM Thanks Andrea for going through the Poem and your sweet comments. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra

Anne-Lise Andresen December 14, 2014 at 7:41 AM - I have listened and read your beautiful poem,Ravindra - I do not have F.B. I can not leave you a comments on your youtube music channel - (is it you yourself singing and playing ?) - Proficient !!! - I wish you and your family Merry Christmas - Really nice that you visited my poem today :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Ravindra K Kapoor December 14, 2014 at 12:44 PM Thanks Anne for your kind comments. Love and best wishes always..Ravindra

Ravindra K Kapoor December 14, 2014 at 2:37 AM These lines were initially written as a Poem then converted into a Song. I have no idea how far it is good or bad and I shall be waiting for the valuable comments from my Poetry Soup friends. Please do not mind as I am not very regular on my friends pages. With best wishes for a Merry Christmas and the New Year 2015. Ravindra K Kapoor