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My Poem You are The pulse of my thoughts The beats of my words The voice of my inspiring muse The ink of my very soul The echo of my despair and hope. You are my poem A beauty in my heart A star on my space A delight in my universe A sigh out of my chest A constant call in my life. You are my poem Waking my pen up to light Making me dream day and night Showing me paths of inner sight Giving me the pleasure to write Bringing me out of my shell with pride. You are My poem 2012

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Date: 5/5/2018 4:10:00 AM
You my friend are one of those poets who can write in Free Verse, and make it sound poetically profound, I love the way you wrote this. Such descriptive lines, such imagery. Besma you are a true poet....Maria xxx
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/5/2018 4:30:00 AM
Your fine words flowed deep into my heart! Touching generous esteem rending me wordless! Deep respect and gratitude. Stay bright and blessed dear Maria. Looking forward to reading your beauties.
Date: 5/4/2018 1:14:00 PM
Dear friend, this is such a beautiful piece - a true Ode to the artistry of poetry writing! You articulated it all so gloriously! It brought sunshine into my heart and my day! Best wishes. Pandita
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/4/2018 1:19:00 PM
I'm delighted that my write filled up your heart and day with beauty! My pleasure dear Pandita, so much humbled by your gerous praise! Stay bright and blessed. My best regards.
Date: 5/4/2018 8:18:00 AM
Your Muse my friend, Bresma, is in high spirits! I feel like celebrating along with her! Uplifting!
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/4/2018 8:33:00 AM
May all be charmed by the muse of Beauty, Love and Poetry! Thank you so much for the honour of your visit. Stay blessed.
Date: 5/4/2018 6:19:00 AM
It's an inspiring theme for many..and you delivered it expertly. Your words make the poem come alive!
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/4/2018 6:38:00 AM
Precious are your words on my humble write! A great pleasure reading what you ink in beauty! Thank you so much dear Vijay. Stay blessed.
Date: 5/4/2018 12:55:00 AM
Beautiful, Besma. This is a lovely poem.
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Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/4/2018 3:35:00 AM
So much elated by your lovely visit and feedback dear Line. Stay safe.

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