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My Plant

When I found you you were like a plant trampled in the mud of your tears. I picked you up and replanted you in the garden of my love. And I let my sun shine on you and my rain nourish you. And I watched you heal and grow, and flowered... Now I cannot stop looking at you - you are the most beautiful thing I've ever seen.

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/16/2013 7:46:00 PM

Written with a tender heart. SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2013 6:09:00 AM

wow, what a beautiful little metaphorical poem!!!

Katherine Braithwaite

Date: 5/8/2013 4:19:00 AM

What a beautiful poem.

David De La Croes
Date: 5/8/2013 7:08:00 AM

Glad you like it, Katherine. Thanks for visiting here... David

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2013 7:10:00 PM

David, a beautiful poem. I can see the life living in your eyes. Comparing her to a trampled plant in the mud of tears, image was heavy,,,, you are amazing... LINDA

David De La Croes
Date: 5/8/2013 4:14:00 AM

Thank you, Linda. Have a great day! David

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 5/7/2013 2:00:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your poem.

David De La Croes
Date: 5/8/2013 4:13:00 AM

Thank you, Ndaba. I appreciate our visit... David