My Persistent Love

My love for you is growing more stronger
very much longer,
a love for you that's definite and sure,
in words I will express this some more,

my love for you is wide open
a heart-beat love that will never die,
it's not a joke or a lie,
my love for you is so high
when compare to the sky
it will never fail nor fall,

my love for you will remain still
these words can't express my emotion
a persistent love that's deeper than the ocean,
my feeling for you is so wide, that my emotions
cannot be express on this one page,
a persistent love that will last even at old age.

Demeter Edwards
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 31, 2012 at 1:12 PM
This poem is beautiful, the love expressed here for this person is over-whelming, must be nice to have someone to love you so much. I loved your poem.
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