My Perpetual Brightest Star-Tet

shine on, my brightest star- my gold stardust... for you’re the wonder that holds the sky up your kindness outweighs all the world’s riches crave my tame touch quench my thirst- you're my... home.
Tetractys This Poetry Contest April 25, 2018 Charles Messina
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Roper Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 4:03 PM
Congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 2:30 PM
Love your poem, Laura. Congrats on the well deserved win.
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May 4, 2019 at 8:41 AM
Hi Laura, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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May 4, 2019 at 8:26 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem, L.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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May 4, 2019 at 7:25 AM
This is so beautiful Lu. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Charlie
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