My Perfect World

I close my eyes just to open them again
I find myself in a place I've never been
Every thing is perfect, the sky is always blue
Outside is nice and warm to
No one has to work because no one needs money
Every ones life is exactly how they want it 
Everything is always peaceful
No guns, no fights, no robbers,no knives 
Kids play freely without a care
No one ever hurts or feels pain from despair
Every one is kind and gets what they need and 
Don't have to go to the government and plea
No one goes hungry, or homeless
No one gets made fun of 
Every one is free, free as a dove
I lie down in the grass and I close my eyes
Just to open them to find myself in my bed
Its back to reality, where nothing is just right
My perfect little world has up and gone good bye
But at least I know I can go back anytime when I close my eyes
Back to the real world where sex and drugs support thugs
Child's thoughts of suicide from taking all the drugs
Doctors, school, and parents think it prevents them from the chokes
Guns and knives, robbers and pointless fights
Problems at home, relationships gone bad
People struggle just to eat 
Coming home late just to complain about their feet
I work so hard not to get far
I try to get up to where I want to be
Something always pulls me back
Feels like I am always being attacked
When I close my eyes it takes me back
To my perfect world where I want to be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Das Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 10:50 AM
nice flow...carry on with ur writings - love swairik
Brown Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 3:44 PM
Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Jenny. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with love and inspiration. May we all be able to read your poetry here at PoetrySoup for years to come. Love, Carol
Estes Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 3:33 PM
Thanks michael i will fix that. i will admit i have trouble with spelling
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January 20, 2010 at 3:29 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. continue to share your creative writing with us all as this delightful poem tonight.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup...
Harman Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 3:26 PM
Nice, i like it. May i give input on... Knifes is spelled knives plural.
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