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With eyes closed, I dream a perfect sunset- reflected in the aquamarine sea, and interlaced with blue and crimson waves that undulate and flow so wild and free. Sun glowing watermelon-tangerine, hangs low, framed by a lemon-saffron sky, and lines of coral streaking twilight blues- relates, another day has bid goodbye. Soon, eyes awake to sense my real world- sun shining pale against dim skies of blue. Dusk has come, and from the open window, scents from lavender lilacs seep through. No rolling sea mirroring great sunsets- only a lavish lawn that sprawls and flows with wind forming grassy, chartreuse waves. My perfect sunset- only dreams disclose. April 15, 2021 ~4th Place~ Premiere Contest: Changing Colors Sponsor: Emile Pinet Judged: 04/19/2021 Required Words in order of appearance: aquamarine, lavender, crimson, tangerine, watermelon, lemon, saffron, coral, lilac, chartreuse

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Date: 4/19/2021 3:25:00 PM
Congratulations, Sandra, on your win. A very beautiful poem with the brilliant use of colour words! Really enjoyed! Love ~ Mala
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Date: 4/19/2021 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a fun contest to judge and your beautiful poem successfully caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
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