My Pen Cries

Pain Fills pens Embedded Within the ink Hurt reveals itself with every stroke Exposing that which I try to conceal Each letter weeps with sorrow My pen cries

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Roman Chebukin

Date: 9/28/2011 6:55:00 PM

Holly shit girl. small but powerful. love it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2011 12:25:00 AM

This is really good, Chiquita. I want to say Banana. (sorry, I bet you get teased about that a lot!!) Chiamaka sure is an interesting name!

Marquis Turner

Date: 9/18/2011 3:41:00 PM

very well written! short but impressive, I like the concept.

Nick Bagnall

Date: 9/14/2011 7:15:00 AM

Each letter weeps with sorrow - what a beautiful phrase, really nice poem, enjoyed a lot

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/10/2011 2:40:00 AM

Your pen weeps beautifully with bright vision, loved it my friend for your creation. Thanks for commenting on my poem. bl

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 9/7/2011 7:51:00 PM

Amen! Tho' the ink tears are beautiful. Sorry it's been a bit since visiting your stuff. I have been touring

Terrell Martin

Date: 9/7/2011 5:48:00 PM

Chiquita, you and your poetry are so deep I feel I could drown in the river of your thoughts. Don't stop. Don't stop. Don't EVER stop...Terry

Richard Pickett

Date: 9/7/2011 10:36:00 AM

You have my pen crying Chiquita, Nicely done...God Bless....Taz

John Smith

Date: 9/5/2011 1:21:00 AM

Chiquita, I like your hot, hot, hot poems. This one gives me pain. It is well written, but...

Kash Poet

Date: 9/5/2011 12:51:00 AM

Very good Tetractys.Nicely expressed feelings through your pen,Chiquita.