Chiquitachiamaka Baity Poet Tetractys

My Pen Cries

Pain
                                                 Fills pens
                                                Embedded
                                             Within the ink
                             Hurt reveals itself with every stroke

                             Exposing that which I try to conceal
                                           Each letter weeps
                                               with sorrow
                                                  My pen
                                                     cries

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Roman Chebukin September 28, 2011 at 6:55 PM Holly shit girl. small but powerful. love it.

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2011 at 12:25 AM This is really good, Chiquita. I want to say Banana. (sorry, I bet you get teased about that a lot!!) Chiamaka sure is an interesting name!

Marquis Turner September 18, 2011 at 3:41 PM very well written! short but impressive, I like the concept.

Nick Bagnall September 14, 2011 at 7:15 AM Each letter weeps with sorrow - what a beautiful phrase, really nice poem, enjoyed a lot

Bl Devnath September 10, 2011 at 2:40 AM Your pen weeps beautifully with bright vision, loved it my friend for your creation. Thanks for commenting on my poem. bl

Jslambert Mister Roboto September 7, 2011 at 7:51 PM Amen! Tho' the ink tears are beautiful. Sorry it's been a bit since visiting your stuff. I have been touring

Terrell Martin September 7, 2011 at 5:48 PM Chiquita, you and your poetry are so deep I feel I could drown in the river of your thoughts. Don't stop. Don't stop. Don't EVER stop...Terry

Richard Pickett September 7, 2011 at 10:36 AM You have my pen crying Chiquita, Nicely done...God Bless....Taz

John Smith September 5, 2011 at 1:21 AM Chiquita, I like your hot, hot, hot poems. This one gives me pain. It is well written, but...

Kash Poet September 5, 2011 at 12:51 AM Very good Tetractys.Nicely expressed feelings through your pen,Chiquita.