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My Pen Cries

Pain Fills pens Embedded Within the ink Hurt reveals itself with every stroke Exposing that which I try to conceal Each letter weeps with sorrow My pen cries

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Roman Chebukin
Date: 9/28/2011 6:55:00 PM
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Holly shit girl. small but powerful. love it.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/27/2011 12:25:00 AM
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This is really good, Chiquita. I want to say Banana. (sorry, I bet you get teased about that a lot!!) Chiamaka sure is an interesting name!
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Marquis Turner
Date: 9/18/2011 3:41:00 PM
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very well written! short but impressive, I like the concept.
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Nick Bagnall
Date: 9/14/2011 7:15:00 AM
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Each letter weeps with sorrow - what a beautiful phrase, really nice poem, enjoyed a lot
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Bl Devnath
Date: 9/10/2011 2:40:00 AM
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Your pen weeps beautifully with bright vision, loved it my friend for your creation. Thanks for commenting on my poem. bl
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Jslambert Mister Roboto
Date: 9/7/2011 7:51:00 PM
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Amen! Tho' the ink tears are beautiful. Sorry it's been a bit since visiting your stuff. I have been touring
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Terrell Martin
Date: 9/7/2011 5:48:00 PM
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Chiquita, you and your poetry are so deep I feel I could drown in the river of your thoughts. Don't stop. Don't stop. Don't EVER stop...Terry
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Richard Pickett
Date: 9/7/2011 10:36:00 AM
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You have my pen crying Chiquita, Nicely done...God Bless....Taz
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John Smith
Date: 9/5/2011 1:21:00 AM
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Chiquita, I like your hot, hot, hot poems. This one gives me pain. It is well written, but...
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Kash Poet
Date: 9/5/2011 12:51:00 AM
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Very good Tetractys.Nicely expressed feelings through your pen,Chiquita.
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