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Already down, he has presented with yet another sign moving away from life, this body is drunk with bad wine health indicators and physical sensors no more stay in line abilities and strength together cannot dine the task to awaken this life is now mine tests and pricks, protocols already reaching nine administering correctly the much needed vine with God on my side, this helpless being is now fine.

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 3/11/2017 1:07:00 AM

Very good write Funon. I suppose you are a doctor? I worked many years as a general practitioner, and I know the feeling. Keep the good work going, Kai

Carol B.

Date: 3/10/2017 4:57:00 PM

Good doctors are vital to ones health. We also have to be our own advocates. Loved the write :)

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/11/2017 1:08:00 AM

Vey true. Doctors can help, but it is a lot about agency. Wishes, Kai

Joseph May

Date: 3/8/2017 5:37:00 AM

Very nicely penned...

Funom Makama
Date: 3/8/2017 6:22:00 AM

Thank you very much sir

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/7/2017 9:39:00 AM

Great that you have given God the due glory, He is the Almighty Doctor:) beautiful monorhyme, Funom:)

Funom Makama
Date: 3/8/2017 6:23:00 AM

Thank you very much sir. Yes, God is the first in all things

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/7/2017 8:36:00 AM

How uplifting my friend, Funom: My great-great-great grandfather Hippocrates would have been so proud of you for having honored your oath! A seven my friend!

Funom Makama
Date: 3/8/2017 6:24:00 AM

Thank you very much sir.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/6/2017 8:36:00 PM

more than administering meds, empathy is what makes a doctor a healer.... what a beauty, funom.. huggs

Funom Makama
Date: 3/8/2017 6:25:00 AM

Thank you very much my wonderful and encouraging friend.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 3/6/2017 8:14:00 PM

Great monorhyme, Funom, there is more to being a doctor than diagnosis and prescriptions. I like the way you put it all together with a nice flow from line to line.

Funom Makama
Date: 3/8/2017 6:26:00 AM

Yet another masterpiece from a role model. This is just awwwwwwww... What a beautiful share...

Jeanie Bennett

Date: 3/6/2017 5:56:00 PM

Very nice Funom !! ~~ Jeanie ~~DH8

Funom Makama
Date: 3/8/2017 6:27:00 AM

Thank you very much for your words of encouragement

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2017 4:51:00 PM

The patient has to really tow the line!! Sometimes doctors are not enough. I enjoyed this, Funom

Funom Makama
Date: 3/8/2017 6:29:00 AM

Thank you very much for your words

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/6/2017 2:35:00 PM

Wonderful monorhyme about the awesome and critical job that doctors provide! I worked with several good ones over the years when I was in nursing.

Funom Makama
Date: 3/8/2017 6:31:00 AM

Thank you very much for your words

Eve Roper

Date: 3/6/2017 11:53:00 AM

Nicely written and sending a message, Funom, a 7. So many doctors need recognition of the quality of work they provide instead of an assembly line. “Blessed be the God and Father of our Lord Jesus Christ, who has blessed us with all spiritual gifts to be able to administer in all to God’s children whose hearts are open…”

Funom Makama
Date: 3/8/2017 6:32:00 AM

thank you very much for your kind words