Funom Makama Poet Rhyme

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My Patient

Already down, he has presented with yet another sign
moving away from life, this body is drunk with bad wine
health indicators and physical sensors no more stay in line
abilities and strength together cannot dine
the task to awaken this life is now mine
tests and pricks, protocols already reaching nine
administering correctly the much needed vine
with God on my side, this helpless being is now fine.

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Kai Michael Neumann March 11, 2017 at 1:07 AM Very good write Funon. I suppose you are a doctor? I worked many years as a general practitioner, and I know the feeling. Keep the good work going, Kai

Carol B. March 10, 2017 at 4:57 PM Good doctors are vital to ones health. We also have to be our own advocates. Loved the write :) Kai Michael Neumann March 11, 2017 at 1:08 AM Vey true. Doctors can help, but it is a lot about agency. Wishes, Kai

Joseph May March 8, 2017 at 5:37 AM Very nicely penned... Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:22 AM Thank you very much sir

Joanna Daniel March 7, 2017 at 9:39 AM Great that you have given God the due glory, He is the Almighty Doctor:) beautiful monorhyme, Funom:) Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:23 AM Thank you very much sir. Yes, God is the first in all things

Demetrios Trifiatis March 7, 2017 at 8:36 AM How uplifting my friend, Funom: My great-great-great grandfather Hippocrates would have been so proud of you for having honored your oath! A seven my friend! Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:24 AM Thank you very much sir.

Nette Onclaud March 6, 2017 at 8:36 PM more than administering meds, empathy is what makes a doctor a healer.... what a beauty, funom.. huggs Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:25 AM Thank you very much my wonderful and encouraging friend.

Reason A. Poteet March 6, 2017 at 8:14 PM Great monorhyme, Funom, there is more to being a doctor than diagnosis and prescriptions. I like the way you put it all together with a nice flow from line to line. Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:26 AM Yet another masterpiece from a role model. This is just awwwwwwww... What a beautiful share...

Jeanie Bennett March 6, 2017 at 5:56 PM Very nice Funom !! ~~ Jeanie ~~DH8 Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:27 AM Thank you very much for your words of encouragement

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2017 at 4:51 PM The patient has to really tow the line!! Sometimes doctors are not enough. I enjoyed this, Funom Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:29 AM Thank you very much for your words

Laura Leiser March 6, 2017 at 2:35 PM Wonderful monorhyme about the awesome and critical job that doctors provide! I worked with several good ones over the years when I was in nursing. Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:31 AM Thank you very much for your words

Eve Roper March 6, 2017 at 11:53 AM Nicely written and sending a message, Funom, a 7. So many doctors need recognition of the quality of work they provide instead of an assembly line. “Blessed be the God and Father of our Lord Jesus Christ, who has blessed us with all spiritual gifts to be able to administer in all to God’s children whose hearts are open…” Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:32 AM thank you very much for your kind words

Deborah Burch March 6, 2017 at 11:50 AM Press on, in the difference you are making, Funom! The great physician is always there to guide you. :) Well done. Deb Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:32 AM Thank you very much for your kind words

Charlie Smith March 6, 2017 at 11:49 AM Well done Funom, you read like you are in the business of caring for others... Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:34 AM Thank you very much for your kind words

CayCay Godwin March 6, 2017 at 11:46 AM Well-written and very touching, Funom - I enjoyed spending time with this poem. All the best ... CayCay Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:35 AM Thank you very much for your kind words

Tim Smith March 6, 2017 at 11:22 AM The patients are grateful of the care given by wonderful doctors. Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:35 AM Thank you very much for your kind words

Kim Rodrigues March 6, 2017 at 11:06 AM Awesome! Love your recognition of God in the process! Just went to the doc today :) Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:37 AM Thank you very much for your kind words