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My Past Love

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When I first submitted this poem to our publisher, I had two different copies: this Revised Edition was supposed to be submitted. I thought I had included this assertion to it, but I've been going through some severe health problems with my oxygen, struggling for air. I became lightheaded from an overworked heart pumping harder from working for the lungs. Created a stir and lost a lot of oxygen, dropping down as low as 64%. I'm a little better now, but permanently now on O2, 24/7/365. 


My Past Love My late wife has told me; it was so easy to fall in love with me? My late love; I saw a glimpse, and thought, she was a shiny thing! My late love; was shown my scars, when suddenly, it was easy to leave. My late love taught me; her desire was being left behind! What if this amazement of my late love, my wife, that she wishes to still stay by my side? I love her blissfully! R.I.P. Shannon Revised Edition; May 14, 2021, 4:57 AM (EST)

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