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My Parting Gifts


                 My Parting Gifts…

Goodbye my son, my only king.
You are my love, your name I sing. 
My wish was more to be with you,
to be with you, and see you through.
This is my fate to leave you now,
my dread was this, to tell you how.
I’m going away, place unknown. 
The way I lived was not my own.
I am going, to ease my pain.
Letting you go, is my complain.
I am with you, with morning dawn.
Kissing with breeze until it’s gone.
My parting gifts to you my son,
to live your life, the way is fun.
Surrender to, the thing you love,
what measures love, grows above.
To get knowledge to find out why;
what is this life to you and I?
Me and you both, we are oneness.
There is no fear, to feel darkness.
I am going without goodbye,
Remember me the way I fly. 


2/16/16 Haloo

For: AJ


Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/10/2016 5:19:00 PM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/11/2016 10:15:00 AM
Thank you dear..
Date: 9/2/2016 7:57:00 PM
very well written Pashang...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/2/2016 11:47:00 PM
Thanks Laura..
Date: 7/30/2016 4:06:00 PM
Emotive and expressive work..Advice from father to son in the last moments of life..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/2/2016 11:47:00 PM
Thanks Sara..
Date: 6/13/2016 2:58:00 PM
how awesome that your second best poem at Soup originated from this challenge we had!You did a wonderful job here. SEVEN
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/13/2016 6:35:00 PM
You're so kind
Date: 5/16/2016 10:36:00 AM
Salute to your pen and a well done to the mind out of which this sea of wisdom emanated. A definite 7
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/16/2016 11:14:00 AM
Thank you my friend, this was done for a contest that was never judged.... Thanks again..
Date: 4/14/2016 3:49:00 AM
Thanks for directing me to this poem, Pashang. Very thought-provoking advice to give to a young person who still has much to experience. "I am going without goodbye, Remember me the way I fly" You've had me captivated all the way through ... I think you are going away with a See You Later, methinks. Your love for your son is genuine.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/14/2016 6:56:00 AM
Thanks Tim, you're so nice... My advice to you is the same. to live your life, the way is fun. Surrender to, the thing you love, To get knowledge to find out why; what is this life to you and I? Pashang
Date: 3/18/2016 3:02:00 PM
By reading the other comments, i now understood fully this poem. Maybe one of this days i need to try a Haloo :-)
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/18/2016 7:10:00 PM
LoL , Haloo is me! you're always welcome. Please remember I'm too old for you.
Date: 3/6/2016 10:37:00 AM
It was at least a nice message to leave behind. No harm in recommending fun, love and knowledge.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/6/2016 1:34:00 PM
OK ...
Date: 2/28/2016 9:39:00 PM
Very loving poem, Pashang, intensely deep, thank you, jimbo
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/29/2016 1:57:00 AM
Thank you my friend... a poem should stimulate the reader, one way or another...Pashang
Date: 2/28/2016 2:24:00 PM
A wonderful parting note to a son Pashang. wishing for you good health...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/29/2016 1:53:00 AM
Thanks Tim... you're so kind
Date: 2/28/2016 9:42:00 AM
Very lovely poem...The love for your son shines through. I also liked your sonnet. I hope that you will continue to write. Wishing you every good thing.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/28/2016 10:39:00 AM
Thank you Eileen... thank you for kind words and good wishes. Pashang
Date: 2/23/2016 3:59:00 PM
This is excellent poetry written from an old soul who has come to grips with spiritual understanding..... kudos
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/23/2016 4:50:00 PM
Thanks Ivor.... the soul is too old... Kudos to you too.. Pashang
Date: 2/17/2016 9:34:00 PM
Knowledge and life lessons are a beautiful, lasting gift to give to your son... This poem is heartfelt and so moving to read. Very well written and expressed, Pashang. Good luck in Viv's contest!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/18/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thanks Kelly.... You're so kind, the topic was not easy. I don't have the courage to show it to my son.,,, Pashang
Date: 2/17/2016 1:42:00 AM
An excellent write, Pashang. Best wishes for the contest. T.J
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/17/2016 1:55:00 AM
Thanks Teppo, you're always kind...