My Painting

I drew a sketch of A mother milking her baby The spring made a messy collage of my painting I drew a picture of A kid playing hide and seek The summer tanned it off before coloring I portrayed someone My first and precious ‘someone’ It withered off in the fall I drew a cartoon of I climbing steps to the North Pole The winter weathered it off The time and tide repaint My painting canvas Coloring, re-coloring and over-coloring Using the palette of seasons My doodles taking the form of a planet No, a galaxy like The Milky Way and its stars Time and tide repaint My painting canvas Using the palette of seasons -Puvi- (7/9/2015)

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Date: 2/27/2016 3:42:00 PM
Hi Puvi, Very interesting and deep. I love the imagery and wordplay. Cheers, Brian
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 2/28/2016 3:35:00 AM
Thank you brian..god bless..:)
Date: 2/9/2016 3:28:00 PM
A very great poem touch my heart by feeling nd emotions great dear
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 2/9/2016 9:21:00 PM
thank you Jagdish for the kind and lovely words, for your time too :)) God bless..
Date: 1/29/2016 1:51:00 PM
- I have already hung your beautiful painting on my wall ..... beautiful poem, Remnants of Some Silly Experiences - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/29/2016 7:56:00 PM
aww...you are so kind Anne..thank you for the heart soothing beautiful words and your love :) God bless..take care
Date: 12/28/2015 8:39:00 PM
truly you have a way with words excellent pen
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Date: 12/28/2015 8:51:00 PM
thank you liam :)) May God shower HIS choisest blessings on you :))
Date: 12/10/2015 4:28:00 AM
Beautiful images!
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Date: 12/10/2015 4:34:00 AM
thank you david :) God bless
Date: 12/1/2015 9:24:00 PM
You have painted a lovely poem here! one that shall not fade!
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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/1/2015 10:58:00 PM
thank you Arthur.. :)) Take care
Date: 12/1/2015 11:03:00 AM
RSSE, lovely poem. Ever changing, life paints our world with a rainbow of colors and new experiences repaint our memories in different hues. For me at least in lighter pastels.
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Date: 12/1/2015 8:54:00 PM
Rightly said James :) Thanks for stopping by and leaving a beautiful comment. Take care..
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