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My Painful Love

What made me write these words, is it our bike rides or late night talks? Are we missing all the fun and joys, just becoz we both made flaws? What is the meaning of our love, if nothing is in our hands now? Where are the beauitful days gone, when we both spent the time on? What if my heart beat stops, and if you hear people cries? Will you then make up your mind, and open your eyes without being blind? I wish i see a change soon in your brain, without any pain,my love gets refrain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/22/2010 8:54:00 PM
Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Swetha. Loved to read. Love,vrushani
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Date: 6/22/2010 1:08:00 PM
This is a wonderful sonnet. I like the flow of the words and the rhyming pattern. It’s certainly lovely to read about love. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/22/2010 7:09:00 AM
It is a pleasure to be reading your poetry this morning Swetha. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with an overload of inspiration. Hoping you will challenge yourself to use all the inspiration which you may receive today. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/22/2010 4:42:00 AM
It's nice rhyming poem, I think always write about and its yearning
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