My Pain

My Pain
Into the rig I drew my blood into
You could never know the pain I’ve been through
I can only think of myself as ick
The pain I’ve caused makes me sick
The tears I’ve shed could fill a small brook
Why god did you bless me with a ugly look
Where is my shield to hide behind now
Id rather die and come back as a cow
Some say life becomes rainbows and flowers
Id love to be able to harness sobrieties powers
Advice for others I can dish
Help for myself I can only wish
My heart and soul I wish I could train
Id never help others for personal gain
Why she likes me I don’t know, she’s a beautiful girl
But hell, ill trust her and give it a whirl
Now its time to wrap this up
My confidence in me, would only fill a small cup

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/22/2011 12:56:00 PM
well, gosh, you mention a beautiful girl in this one who loves you, Nick. I think that shuld boost your confidence a lot. I hope you are feeling on top of the world these days! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/2/2011 3:56:00 PM
Congrats Nick on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful piece to share with us all today with luv... u can view it on the home pages ...
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