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My Pain

In the tears of the flute I've lost far beyond The tune of that flute reflects the tune of my cry She's crying and crying, but why? Why's she crying so much? What's her suffering? Who's hit her, who's left her? Doesn't she know? My pain is much more than hers!

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Date: 3/13/2024 5:36:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 7/11/2018 12:50:00 AM
You're my midnight read tonight.. try to squeeze in a couple of good poems before bedtime.. so glad I found your creative work!
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