Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

My Own Stage

I'm building a stage from lost thoughts and goodbyes...
Each section another piece that tumbles down and slides...
The lights are dim and the curtains are transparent...
There are echoes of laughter and whispers that blend so different...
I stand alone to an audience of faded mistakes that never blink...
All the while I stretch my eyes up and over to a distant smile who winks...
I scream the words thank you without ever making a sound...
And our souls make love across a world where dreams are never bound...

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Dinda Minardi June 5, 2012 at 8:16 AM where dreams are never bound... A very uplifting words there, I could use some of these kinds :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 31, 2012 at 9:52 PM enchanting especially the last line .. souls making love.. astounding.. a vision of lovely immersing into another realm luv.. JG luvs WK always and forever .. xoxo..

John Loving Iii May 28, 2012 at 8:05 PM the last four lines are four profound statements in each one. the four last lines. they amaze me and they are my worship as well. hallalujah thank you Lord for this.

Andrea Dietrich May 28, 2012 at 1:03 PM Love those last lines, "where dreams are never bound" YOu captured the stage of life and poetry so well there!

Cecilia Macfarlane May 26, 2012 at 3:25 PM Wonderful write Micheal...I love it!

David Williams May 26, 2012 at 8:48 AM Michael my buddy, I love the souls making love across the world, well done ..David

James Peranteau May 26, 2012 at 7:31 AM As a poet, even I could not express the joy of reading this write dear poet....'cept..mine words to you here ! Have a wonderful weekend my friend ! Much love, james

Barbara Gorelick May 25, 2012 at 6:48 PM Have been following your poetry travels..good things are happening for you..I like this one too..BG

Russell Sivey May 25, 2012 at 3:50 PM Your write is truly fascinating! I really enjoyed your piece of art that you have written! Marvelous poem Michael! Great Work!!