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My Own Proverb

My own proverb...... “ The peace is always buried alive in the name of freedom, where all those fake leaders get together and march forward to the cemetery to bury the body called ‘Peace’ ”. - Ravi Sathasivam

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/3/2013 10:22:00 AM

This is good Ravi. Thanks for sharing your view. ... Lucilla

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/8/2013 11:05:00 PM

Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/30/2013 11:50:00 AM

words of wisdom soulfully impressed here, ravi... animosity and strife are always disguised as tools for peace... well done!..:) huggs

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/30/2013 10:08:00 PM

Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 9/30/2013 10:17:00 AM

I've heard the trumpets sound, as they laid the body down. Below did it sound, Echoing in the cold hard ground. On the tomb stone it reads here shall rest, the word forever called Peace. nice write hope you don't mind you inspired me thus.

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/30/2013 10:07:00 PM

Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2013 4:23:00 PM

very different kind of haiku but I sure enjoyed it! the metaphor is strong!!

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/29/2013 10:13:00 PM

Thanks for your comment. Appreciated. Hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/29/2013 12:29:00 PM

Interesting political views penned..Our freedom can be taken away little snippets at a time before we even know what happened..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/29/2013 10:12:00 PM

Thanks for your comment. appreciated. Hugs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/29/2013 8:42:00 AM

Quite unusual haiku I have ever read, Ravi

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/29/2013 10:12:00 PM

Thanks for your comment sir. Appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/29/2013 7:04:00 AM

- Live better ... give peace a chance !!! - Well written, Ravi. - All the best to you my friend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 9/29/2013 10:12:00 PM

Thanks for your comment my friend. Appreciated. Hugs and kisses xxx