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My Own Proverb

My own proverb......

“ The peace is always buried alive in the name of freedom, 
where all those fake leaders get together and march forward to the
cemetery to bury the body called ‘Peace’ ”.
 
- Ravi Sathasivam

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Lucilla Carrillo

October 3, 2013 at 10:22 AM

This is good Ravi. Thanks for sharing your view. ... Lucilla

Ravi Sathasivam

October 8, 2013 at 11:05 PM

Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Nette Onclaud

September 30, 2013 at 11:50 AM

words of wisdom soulfully impressed here, ravi... animosity and strife are always disguised as tools for peace... well done!..:) huggs

Ravi Sathasivam

September 30, 2013 at 10:08 PM

Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Cherl Dunn

September 30, 2013 at 10:17 AM

I've heard the trumpets sound, as they laid the body down. Below did it sound, Echoing in the cold hard ground. On the tomb stone it reads here shall rest, the word forever called Peace. nice write hope you don't mind you inspired me thus.

Ravi Sathasivam

September 30, 2013 at 10:07 PM

Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

September 29, 2013 at 4:23 PM

very different kind of haiku but I sure enjoyed it! the metaphor is strong!!

Ravi Sathasivam

September 29, 2013 at 10:13 PM

Thanks for your comment. Appreciated. Hugs

Sara Kendrick

September 29, 2013 at 12:29 PM

Interesting political views penned..Our freedom can be taken away little snippets at a time before we even know what happened..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Ravi Sathasivam

September 29, 2013 at 10:12 PM

Thanks for your comment. appreciated. Hugs