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My Own Company

I decided to go for a solitary picnic, But was surrounded by flies and wasps, and ants crawled over me, So I left them to it and had lunch in a quiet pub.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2011 11:26:00 PM

hahaha, I am glad this made the top ten. It's pure delight!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/19/2011 10:02:00 AM

:) So cute, Jack. Congratulations on your win in Carol's Picnic Contest. Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 5/18/2011 6:01:00 PM

Jack, so great to see you on the winner's list with this great one. Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 5/18/2011 11:07:00 AM

Congrats jack on your super win:)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/18/2011 10:25:00 AM

yeah! Wish i was near a good Irish Pub! Congrad's Light & Love

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/18/2011 9:58:00 AM

Sounds like a wise decision. Congratulations Jack. Love, Joyce

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/18/2011 8:09:00 AM

super cheers for the fine win, jack! :) huggs

Ralph Taylor

Date: 5/18/2011 7:44:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Jack. Nice going. Thanks for your comments. Ralph

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/18/2011 7:09:00 AM

Congratulations on the this win in the contest of carol, jack

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/18/2011 5:15:00 AM

Congrats Jack on your super win in the picnic contest my friend with this super funny entry.. it is a delight.. and so original and creative luv.. enjoy your top ten victory ..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2011 4:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Jack. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/13/2011 8:39:00 PM

Good idea Jack.. u have such clever quips in your lines luv..good luck in this picnic contest.. excellent choice the pub.. oh.. happy weekend..

Kash Poet

Date: 5/9/2011 11:04:00 AM

HaHa very funny...enjoyed--kash

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/9/2011 10:12:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words about Daniel, Jack. The song always makes me cry, but this time I was able to use words from it to express my grief and somehow it makes me feel better. Hope you and Sue had a terrific weekend! Love and blessings, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/8/2011 1:53:00 PM

hehe, you could have invited them with for a drink Jack ;) just kidding, I enjoyed this witty write

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/8/2011 9:40:00 AM

Those insects can really spoil a picnic, Jack. I would have left and joined you in that pub. Carol will get a kick out of this entry! Wishing you success in her contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/8/2011 8:56:00 AM

Hahaha... deep and meaningful write with humor and wit with apt images, jack