Jack Horne Poet Limerick

My Overflowing Bathroom

I fished in the sink for a cod
and landed a whole dolphin pod;
the bath and the loo
were full of them too -
but whales were too much for the rod...

for Constance's Form O 'Overflowing' contest

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Paul Callus February 27, 2018 at 11:53 AM Your witty pen is overflowing with humour, Jack:) Love the smooth flow. Regards // paul

Phyllis Babcock May 24, 2017 at 5:14 PM Had me chuckling on this one. Come to think of it had a dream about a whale or shark swimming around me. lol. love phyl

Scott Thirtyseven May 24, 2017 at 10:09 AM What an imagination, great write.

Andrea Dietrich May 13, 2017 at 9:24 PM oh my, this is funny, Jack. So good to see you post a limerick. I will go see if I have missed anything else recent, but I don't think so.

Eve Roper May 13, 2017 at 8:03 PM Haha... don't tell my husband he'll be coming for fish... ~*

Sara Kendrick May 13, 2017 at 7:16 AM Cute one..Maybe I should say very imaginative..Reads like a winner..Way to go..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara

Connie Marcum Wong May 12, 2017 at 5:14 PM A good one Jack! I can't even write one, so I admire those who can. 7 ; )

Jan Allison May 12, 2017 at 5:14 PM ha ha ha hilarious Jack I think you had a whale of a time writing this little gem:-) hugs Jan xx