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My overflowing bathroom

I fished in the sink for a cod and landed a whole dolphin pod; the bath and the loo were full of them too - but whales were too much for the rod... for Constance's Form O 'Overflowing' contest

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Date: 2/27/2018 11:53:00 AM
Your witty pen is overflowing with humour, Jack:) Love the smooth flow. Regards // paul
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Date: 5/24/2017 5:14:00 PM
Had me chuckling on this one. Come to think of it had a dream about a whale or shark swimming around me. lol. love phyl
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Date: 5/24/2017 10:09:00 AM
What an imagination, great write.
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Date: 5/13/2017 9:24:00 PM
oh my, this is funny, Jack. So good to see you post a limerick. I will go see if I have missed anything else recent, but I don't think so.
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Date: 5/13/2017 8:03:00 PM
Haha... don't tell my husband he'll be coming for fish... ~*
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Date: 5/13/2017 7:16:00 AM
Cute one..Maybe I should say very imaginative..Reads like a winner..Way to go..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 5/12/2017 5:14:00 PM
ha ha ha hilarious Jack I think you had a whale of a time writing this little gem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/12/2017 5:14:00 PM
A good one Jack! I can't even write one, so I admire those who can. 7 ; )
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