My Other Halves

Me and him and her
we are all.
He is confident and forceful,
she is doubting and horrible.
Me,
I am stuck in the middle.
on my own.
Only getting attention
when I quietly demand
and subtly moan.
Friend or foe?
They toe the party line,
they are me.
They tell me great things
that I do
and things I see.
They give me reason
and hold my esteem
fast like glue.
Outside:
I am at the bottom
not even one foot on a rung,
not even a clue.
So tell me why,
if you can.
I should not live with my two?

Star and celeb I am in their time.
Here I can do no wrong,
I have committed no crime.
They may scream and yell, 
but they do tell;
true lies.
So I'm going to stay in my place,
Alerted inside:
to your other world,
inquisition spies.
Trying fragile heart:
while I dry my eyes.





I work in mental health and was inspired to write of someone I know who has schizophrenia.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/5/2012 3:06:00 AM
a perfect and deep picture .thank you for sharing .jk
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Ross Thompson
Date: 8/12/2012 4:51:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 1/29/2012 2:20:00 PM
Thank you for sharing it,nicely written.oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/29/2012 2:26:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 12/20/2011 4:42:00 PM
I would never have gotten schizophrenia out of this OH Y.no..I was thinking of a menage a tois? [blush] too many me's aye? Interesting perspective. Happy Holy Days
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Date: 12/24/2011 4:29:00 AM
And a happy holidays to you
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