'my Opus'

your voice, my opus a voyage undertaken musical tones
19/05/2011... 13:33
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Martin Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 3:00 PM
'your voice my opus'. Sooo good, Wilma. Beguilingly complex and wrought with emotion.
Dufresne Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 6:09 AM
Lots of love going on here with this lovely Senryu, Wilma. It is very well done
Sweetheart Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 1:20 PM
Just wanted to say hope u join in my fun today as it is my birthday and am celebrating via soup for my soup family is as important to me as my personal family and Wilma... lets party..luv..
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 1:26 AM
really nice senryu. Was it for any contest, Wilma?
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 6:34 PM
Wow Girlfriend, you always amaze me XXX Love it
Falotico Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 3:09 PM
Beautiful Senryu!!!!! I love it!!!! and you know that already Im sure.... with love MIchael
Poet Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 7:31 PM
Wonderful Senryu Wilma.Love it.
Devonshire Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 2:53 PM
Beautiful senryu, Wilma. Makes me think of my late husband. He was a revered expert on all types of music and the song of our love still plays in my heart. Much love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 2:20 PM
Enjoyed reading this expressive work..Voices can evoke emotion for good or bad..Thanks for stopping by and leaving a kind review of my work..Sara
Foulk Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 11:52 AM
very fine piece of poetry, enjoyed it.
K. Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 11:36 AM
was about to sleep already when I read your comment and you got me laughing --haha I think I should be wary before I sing again lol! see even my captcha supports it! says right here, JNX3-- could be jinx times three?? lol-- I would sing to you Somebody, but nahhh, you don't need it anymore, since you already seemed to have found that Somebody?? probably? ooh wee ;)
K. Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 2:48 AM
what?! there's drama already with mr. somebody??? well forgetful me is reminding forgetful you :D ok you want me to sing it now?? haha closet diva here, heehee yeahhh right.
Neels Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 11:44 AM
oh my word will you stop it now already??? You should hear about the drama surrounding that somebody lol will email you and if I forget please remind forgetful me lol
K. Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 11:38 AM
& hmm could be that your Opus came from that organ that goes lub dub, lub dub?? ;)
K. Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 11:16 AM
hmm am I understanding this write? ok I am pleading that I am sleepy as an excuse if I didn't get it-- who you singing a duet with??? ;) hugs to you :)
Mehta Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 10:37 AM
very pleasant and lovely, Wilma
Fraser Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 6:04 AM
This oozes warmth Wilma, nice poem sassy girl. Have a lovely day....:)
Sweetheart Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 6:03 AM
Sorry I changed it Wilma.. a new poet named Sid left a sweet comment right above yours and my mind is going dizzy on this airplane luv.. aiming for home now with a short layover soon.. can u have jet lag in the plane? instead of after the ride is over? sorry luv.. these three lines are so wonderful .. your voice, my opus.. says it all my friend..luv..
Song Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 5:39 AM
A tribute to your love, right? Lovely and oh so affectionate. Enjoyed. Gwendolen
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May 19, 2011 at 4:54 AM
ooo! can this be like a god of some sort... or maybe not... a clever senryu,... and for some reason i thought my day meant your night,.. boy am i way off... haha! thats what i get for waking up to early.. And yes nikko is for sure the one who needs to be in la la land right now... Its always nice to see her up when I'm on,,, you take care now,..p.d.
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