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My Opinion

You wake up often in the morning,
deep bruises, redness on your cheeks.
Your confidence level softened,
Once strong minded, now weak.
Yet, through all this punishment
which you've done nothing to receive,
you stand by his side, smiling.
I sit back and watch in disbelief.
For years we have had this friendship
and for years held nothing back.
So, i hope you that accept this,
my opinion.
I can only hope you turn your back...



Jared Pickett	
1/15/2010
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friendshiphopefree verse

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 26, 2010 at 8:03 PM

SOUP MAIL... also did u hear about John Heck?.. he had surgery today for a cancerous tumor on his left lung.. check out the blog posted by Carolyn Devonshire as a favor to John's Mom... sad... luv.. "Sweetie"

Marty Owens

January 20, 2010 at 6:45 AM

Jared, I wanted to comment on this the first day that you wrote it, but I couldn't bring myself to do it...I've been reading it for several days and thinking about this...I want to say that I understand, but everyone's circumstances are different...so let me just say I'll pray for this situation...You wrote well my friend...as always...Marty

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 19, 2010 at 12:58 AM

Jared, Sadly, all too often women find themselves in this sad and destructive position. But for some reason, they keep gong back. At least these days, protective services are available to help women and children in need. But the adults have to be willing to do as you hope-- turn their backs, walk away, and get the help they need from social services in their community Services "Hide" them from their abuser until decisions and legal actions are in place. Good of you to support her. Lovingly.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 18, 2010 at 4:41 PM

Delicate and sensitive words from u... hard to write about... even harder to do... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Debbie Guzzi

January 15, 2010 at 1:12 PM

Such a touching verse, I too know a woman in this position most of us do if we are to admit it. They must free themselves and all their friends await the freeing! As a verse it is very powerful..I am soup mailing you! Light & Love