My Opinion
You wake up often in the morning,
deep bruises, redness on your cheeks.
Your confidence level softened,
Once strong minded, now weak.
Yet, through all this punishment
which you've done nothing to receive,
you stand by his side, smiling.
I sit back and watch in disbelief.
For years we have had this friendship
and for years held nothing back.
So, i hope you that accept this,
my opinion.
I can only hope you turn your back...
Jared Pickett
1/15/2010
Asavvy1
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