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MY ONE LINERS WILL is to STRIKE T S U N A M I Jazzy flamboyant boogie wave climax, a disaster show. D E C E P T I O N Sugar-apple are the smiles yet to her eyes, I see lemons. D I R T Y D A N C I N G Dauntless dazzling dainty dolls dirtily dancing disfigures dignity. S U C C E S S I bit the metals but I didn't break, only I became marshmallows after. B A T T L E of the S E X E S Hundred men can build a bridge yet with one woman there's a home. _________________________________________________________________ 9:57 PM; December 17, 2015

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/2/2016 12:01:00 AM

The one liners are really witty. I loved reading them!

James Fraser

Date: 12/26/2015 6:21:00 AM

Love these one liners little one. All are cleverly crafted. Good luck in the contest ~~ hugs ~~ // James, your Huge One xxx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/18/2015 3:36:00 PM

I really like the last one..Women are multipliers..Buy her some groceries and she will make you many meals, get her a house and she will make you a home, love her and she will give you love in return, give her grief and you will cry..Sara..Thanks for stopping by..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/17/2015 3:54:00 PM

I loved reading these, Olive. Especially loved the alliterative D one. and the last two were with cute endings!!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 12/17/2015 12:14:00 PM

What a beautiful penned piece. Excellent.......A.M.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/20/2015 2:47:00 AM

Thank you so much..

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/17/2015 11:47:00 AM

Beautiful liners my lovely friend. Last is very attractive where reality smiles. 7 is lined for all the lines. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/19/2015 2:44:00 AM

Thanks much for liking and saying they are beautiful! ~Olive Eloisa =`)

Michael Tor

Date: 12/17/2015 10:11:00 AM

Love your One Liners Olive Silent One would be proud of you. lol. Enjoyed reading.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/18/2015 6:31:00 AM

Michael use to do one liner poetry in my fb... =`) challrnging thNks much..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/17/2015 9:18:00 AM

- Well done one liners Olive :) - I wish you and your loved ones a beautiful Christmas :) - Enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/18/2015 2:14:00 AM

Thanks much Anne Lise, Its one of the rarest time of the year that we will be complete in celebrating Christmas as a family... =`)and more we have my nephew.. =`) so glad I pray that soon My Christmas will be with JAmes.. =`)