My Oldest Son (Septet)
He’s brazen,
But downright smart too
He’s the eldest of my kids
Blonde, blue eyed, smart and handsome, he is
He doesn’t know that at all
Honest and humble
That’s my boy!
Septet syllable count is 3,5,7,9,7,5,3, unrhymed
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