My Old Farm House

two story abode-
old white wooden planks and beams…
oh how I loved you

strong structured built frame -
cool basement to store; protect…
a great hiding place

vast playroom closet –
just right for a huge playhouse…
imagination

wood stove radiates -
prepares meals and heats downstairs…
sore bone therapy 

family room collage -
old radio plays music…
period to relate

bedtime for four kids -
one bed keeping all cozy…
north room harbors ghosts

Copyright © 2015  By Caryl S. Muzzey

9/17/15

First Place Winner ~ "A child's first home" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Verlena S. Walker
September 30, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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October 22, 2015 at 1:17 PM
Caryl, Congratulations on "A child's first home WIN." **SKAT**
Muzzey Avatar
October 24, 2015 at 10:29 AM
Thank you SKAT A~ Caryl
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 7:00 AM
I loved your entry Caryl. I hope your ghosts were friendly. Congratulations on your well deserved win!
Muzzey Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 1:32 PM
Thank you Connie. As far as I remember, they never really caused any big trouble, just made noise at night. Caryl
Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 8:19 PM
oh do tell!! were there really ghosts, Caryl? I thought I had seen all your poems but was pleasantly surprised to find this one here never seen yet. Can't believe I am first to comment. I really enjoyed it.
Muzzey Avatar
October 19, 2015 at 1:31 PM
Well Andrea, as far as being kids and hearing thinks in the night from that room made us believers... Guests refused to sleep in that room, always took the kid's room and made us sleep in there. It still is a good memory though... Glad you enjoyed~ Caryl
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