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My Old Companions

My Old Companions Once you arched where children play, Heard the laughter and slapping of tether balls; Roads made of sand with little boy sounds A long time ago. You have been my friends, my loyal protectors, Though storms have gnarled your limbs. Home to owls, blue jays and sparrows, Your friends, my friends. I’ve watched your siblings’ peeling bark, And I believe I heard your cries, As cracks appeared and chainsaws neared, You had to say goodbyes. As long as you will umbrella my head, As long as you will whisper your truths, Through seasons’ breezes and your lot in life, I will love you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/28/2017 2:40:00 PM
Very serene and insightful poem, Sunlite. You penned an apt description of trees. Love the title too. Enjoyed reading this poem very much. Love and smiles always.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/30/2017 6:03:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment.
Date: 6/18/2017 5:28:00 PM
Great, I am looking beyond the true essences of your thought process. But could words above also represent Grandparents, A house/castle, Elderly widow/woman one could exchange Tree and enter one of these just a creative observance narrative, mean no harm I just saw other things as well as "trees" I'm a new follower Yeah!!! Don't stop writing, feel what you write, write what you feel Blessings & Poetically yours ---James Edward Lee Sr.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/30/2017 6:04:00 PM
Oh, you are really appreciated. I find trees to have personalities; once wrote a poem "Trees Are People, Too."
Date: 6/17/2017 1:56:00 PM
This is such a sweet write about the trees. I love it :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/30/2017 6:06:00 PM
And sweet of you, Heidi!
Date: 6/11/2017 5:13:00 AM
I dearly love poetry about trees Sunlite. You share an intimacy with nature that is so beautiful. They truly are our protectors and friends and they keep a record of time within their trunks. I don't doubt that they also hold within a memory. ; )
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/30/2017 6:08:00 PM
That is really an appreciated comment!
Date: 6/10/2017 11:18:00 AM
I can hear you saying this. It has a calm, comfortable sound.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/30/2017 6:09:00 PM
I didn't realize I had not thanked you for this kind comment. So thank you now, Dale.

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