My Ode To the Netherlands

The iridescent raven perched upon pilings
By just one lake in Friesland's beautiful wetland outings

His golden beak and orange legs with claws set off
Against black feathers that glisten and are a rain runoff

Carefully he watches the Edelhert fawn play
At the edge of the lake, close to woods, where he lives all day 

He had seen the das at dusk as he watched them all
His duty as the lookout to warn them against harm's fall

Against the vas that sly thief, who comes in the night
When all sleep, even for the watchman death could be his plight 

Some Of The Wildlife In The Netherlands

Edelhert:Red Deer
Das:Badger
Vas:Fox
Sponsor: Elly Wouterse
Contest: Your Ode To "My"Netherlands And/Or "My Friesland"
Written: April 22, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 9:08 PM
Hello Sara, once again... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 1:44 AM
A very lovely winning entry Sara. Big Congratulations!
A   Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 6:39 PM
Congratulations, Sara... Wonderful ode... Linda
A. Sharma Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 4:26 AM
Wonderful write Sara ! Congrats on fine win !
Callus Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 4:05 PM
Congrats on win Sara. Like the way you tackled this write....the natural one. // paul
Horne Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 3:06 PM
lovely and well researched write, my friend. I think of Poe's great poem when I think of ravens now
Mcdaid Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 11:08 AM
beautifully drawn excellently penned piece
Wegman Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 8:31 AM
It is easy to visualize the place and raven here. Well done. A winner, no doubt!
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 3:57 PM
very creative how you took the nature way and talked about animals in your poem. Unique and descriptive.
Toil Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 8:05 AM
A beautiful sketch of a wild life scene. I don't know why but I am reminded of Monet's paintings of lily pads on a pond. Have a good day. Peace...Sam
Sibanda Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 12:01 PM
Sara, a wonderful piece of art.
Smith Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:31 AM
This is splendid Sara and I love how you used the native words for the animals...hugs Tim
Gorelick Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 9:02 AM
Good work Sara, as usual. I haven't done any research yet for this one..keep meaning to , but the contest will be over before I get to it. I like your slightly different approach.. Now I want to look up Edelhert fawn..BG
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