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My Ode To the Netherlands

The iridescent raven perched upon pilings By just one lake in Friesland's beautiful wetland outings His golden beak and orange legs with claws set off Against black feathers that glisten and are a rain runoff Carefully he watches the Edelhert fawn play At the edge of the lake, close to woods, where he lives all day He had seen the das at dusk as he watched them all His duty as the lookout to warn them against harm's fall Against the vas that sly thief, who comes in the night When all sleep, even for the watchman death could be his plight Some Of The Wildlife In The Netherlands Edelhert:Red Deer Das:Badger Vas:Fox Sponsor: Elly Wouterse Contest: Your Ode To "My"Netherlands And/Or "My Friesland" Written: April 22, 2014

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Date: 5/13/2014 9:08:00 PM
Hello Sara, once again... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/30/2014 1:44:00 AM
A very lovely winning entry Sara. Big Congratulations!
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Date: 4/29/2014 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations, Sara... Wonderful ode... Linda
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Date: 4/29/2014 4:26:00 AM
Wonderful write Sara ! Congrats on fine win !
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Date: 4/28/2014 4:05:00 PM
Congrats on win Sara. Like the way you tackled this write....the natural one. // paul
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Date: 4/24/2014 3:06:00 PM
lovely and well researched write, my friend. I think of Poe's great poem when I think of ravens now
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Date: 4/24/2014 11:08:00 AM
beautifully drawn excellently penned piece
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Date: 4/24/2014 8:31:00 AM
It is easy to visualize the place and raven here. Well done. A winner, no doubt!
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Date: 4/23/2014 3:57:00 PM
very creative how you took the nature way and talked about animals in your poem. Unique and descriptive.
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Date: 4/23/2014 8:05:00 AM
A beautiful sketch of a wild life scene. I don't know why but I am reminded of Monet's paintings of lily pads on a pond. Have a good day. Peace...Sam
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Date: 4/22/2014 12:01:00 PM
Sara, a wonderful piece of art.
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Date: 4/22/2014 9:31:00 AM
This is splendid Sara and I love how you used the native words for the animals...hugs Tim
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Date: 4/22/2014 9:02:00 AM
Good work Sara, as usual. I haven't done any research yet for this one..keep meaning to , but the contest will be over before I get to it. I like your slightly different approach.. Now I want to look up Edelhert fawn..BG
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