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My Ode To the Netherlands

Forefathers were Dutch Came through in the clutch Never needed no crutch Thank you very much Ain’t never been there (No money to spare) Hope Elly will share expensive plane fare If I win her contest I shall not protest Quite sure she’ll detest and think I’m a pest… This is really a monorhyme but I cheated and made it a couplet, so what?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/30/2014 2:02:00 PM
Way to go for the contest..Great win..Congrats.Sara
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Date: 4/29/2014 6:40:00 PM
Hi Tim, a lovely poem and win... XOX~ Linda
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Date: 4/29/2014 4:46:00 AM
Tim it's wonderful , much saying few powerful words ,,, congrats on win !
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Date: 3/6/2014 8:33:00 AM
Unfortunately I have no pull with the judge. I did however enjoy the poem.
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Date: 2/23/2014 1:49:00 PM
Tim, I think Elly will get a smile out of this, good luck...David
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Date: 2/22/2014 5:19:00 AM
We are allowed to cheat its poetic license he he good luck in the comp :) much love Jayne x
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