My Odd Silver Mind

My odd silver mind
It grows through time
When I stop thinking
it stops growing
My odd silver mind


[ I wrote this when I was like 4 or 5 years old ;-) ]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chachere Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 6:12 PM
this is great! i love it. "It grows through time" very good poetry. and that is funny.lol i see you have a wtty imagination then! -Always&Forever Lynette
Mitchell Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 5:21 AM
This is a very insightful write for a 4-5 yr old! I like it:)
Owens Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 7:58 PM
Very cute and very good for a 4 or 5 yr old...Enjoyed...Marty
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