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My Octohat

I was wrestling with an octopus His arms were everywhere, I didn't know which one to grab And boy I needed air. So I tied them all in knots That put paid to that, Then I took him home, dried him out And wore him as a hat. Entry for Write a funny Poem for a 7 year old Sponsored by Kevin Shaw 31/1/18. Placed 2nd.

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Date: 2/13/2018 10:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Gary, great write for the contest! Great rhymes and flow in your poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/14/2018 5:23:00 AM
Thank you Eve :)
Date: 2/12/2018 6:46:00 PM
bahaha, loved this poem Gary, great stuff, congratulations on ur winning placement
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/13/2018 3:52:00 AM
Thank you Lewis :)
Date: 2/12/2018 6:05:00 PM
Congrats, Gary!
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/12/2018 6:17:00 PM
Thank you Kim :)
Date: 2/12/2018 5:53:00 PM
Many congrats Gary i knew this would do well:-) hugs jan xx
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/12/2018 6:17:00 PM
Thank you Jan :)
Date: 2/12/2018 5:50:00 PM
Well done, Gary. Congrats on your win.
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/12/2018 6:17:00 PM
Thank you Line :)
Date: 1/31/2018 5:46:00 PM
ha ha ha this is such fun Gary and i love the pic:-) Good luck, hugs jan xx
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/31/2018 5:46:00 PM
Thank you Jan :)

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