Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

My Octohat

I was wrestling with an octopus

His arms were everywhere,

I didn't know which one to grab

And boy I needed air.

So I tied them all in knots

That put paid to that,

Then I took him home, dried him out

And wore him as a hat.







Entry for Write a funny Poem for a 7 year old
Sponsored by Kevin Shaw
31/1/18. Placed 2nd.

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Eve Roper February 13, 2018 at 10:35 PM Congratulations on your win, Gary, great write for the contest! Great rhymes and flow in your poem. Hugs Eve ~`* Gary Smith February 14, 2018 at 5:23 AM Thank you Eve :)

Lewis Raynes February 12, 2018 at 6:46 PM bahaha, loved this poem Gary, great stuff, congratulations on ur winning placement Gary Smith February 13, 2018 at 3:52 AM Thank you Lewis :)

Kim Rodrigues February 12, 2018 at 6:05 PM Congrats, Gary! Gary Smith February 12, 2018 at 6:17 PM Thank you Kim :)

Jan Allison February 12, 2018 at 5:53 PM Many congrats Gary i knew this would do well:-) hugs jan xx Gary Smith February 12, 2018 at 6:17 PM Thank you Jan :)

Line Gauthier February 12, 2018 at 5:50 PM Well done, Gary. Congrats on your win. Gary Smith February 12, 2018 at 6:17 PM Thank you Line :)

Jan Allison January 31, 2018 at 5:46 PM ha ha ha this is such fun Gary and i love the pic:-) Good luck, hugs jan xx Gary Smith January 31, 2018 at 5:46 PM Thank you Jan :)