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My Obsession

My obsession.. like moth to a flame
This love for him will never cease
We've said, 'what will be, will be'
Dreams do die, but once
Their ashes tell truths
Always alive 
In my soul
Breathing
Him

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Gert W. Knop

October 26, 2010 at 3:17 AM

Yes, I agree with Wilma! Well written Nonet, Audrey! And thank you for your kind comments! Have a nice week!...Gert :)

Wilma Neels

October 24, 2010 at 12:16 PM

Audrey, I just love the opening line of your nonet. Exquisite!! My weekend's been great thanks. Pity mine is over ;( enjoy the rest of yours love Wilma

Joy Wellington

October 24, 2010 at 3:05 AM

One of my Favs for sure! Much happiness to you dear! Joy (Jew)

C.C Bloomsfield

October 23, 2010 at 10:08 PM

Love is crazy indeed dear. ..and this is sweet !glad to be reading you,Celene.

Mohammad Taha Effendi

October 22, 2010 at 2:36 PM

Exquisite write!

James Peranteau

October 22, 2010 at 11:37 AM

When it's hot it's hot ! Passion fills your slip here dear poet...great write ! much love, james

De R

October 22, 2010 at 5:24 AM

Loved the comparison in the first line. Be careful, obsessions are not very healthy. A great nonet, Audrey! Emilia

Audrey Haick

October 21, 2010 at 8:36 PM

Hahaha! Not to worry seafaress! It's not that extreme, I promise you..lol Glen Close was beyond "obsessed"! I'm not that brave.. Now that was a Thriller! e-mail ! Much love to ya!

Carolyn Devonshire

October 21, 2010 at 8:25 PM

Excellent, Dimples. But be careful: "Fatal Attraction" was a story of obsessive love and you may remember the havoc it wrought for Michael Douglas and his family. I do think you will handle your "obsession" much better than Glenn Close. LOL Great Nonet! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

October 21, 2010 at 4:50 PM

Very soul searching introspective thoughts penned well

Michael Gelb

October 21, 2010 at 4:12 PM

I liked your poem. Thanks for the comment to mine.

Sara Kendrick

October 21, 2010 at 3:50 PM

Very impressive love story in a few short lines..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 21, 2010 at 2:55 PM

A fabulous Nonet.. my fav form of poetry these day Audrey my BBF .. enjoyed this obsession with u as I have my own with Ron luv.. hope all is well with u ...