My Oblivion

You are the gasp of air of my final breath.
You are the beginning of my end, my sweet , sweet oblivion.
You are the shimmer in my eyes before I fade.
You are the light at the tunnels bend, my sweet , sweet oblivion.
You are the frantic murmers before my heart stops.
You are the hole in my chest that deepened, my sweet, sweet oblivion. 
You are the bit of warmth before I turn cold.
You are the last impusle before I stiffend, my sweet, sweet oblivion.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 28, 2015 at 3:14 PM
STEVEN, Congratulations, that is all :-) **SKAT WAS HERE** <---- copy paste.... hardy har har
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August 9, 2014 at 6:18 PM
Oh very deep and dark - just hope the end is swift i don't want to linger:-( Hugs Jan xxx
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