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My Oatmeal

My oatmeal is not like yours Unless you stir in a tablespoon of peanut butter Add a little chocolate syrup And three giant spoons full of brown sugar. Then it is exactly like yours Except I sneak in more sugar.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/30/2018 12:52:00 PM
Lol! Too cute ;) xomo!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/30/2018 2:58:00 PM
You did! I used to have a crazy sweet tooth, seven sugars in my coffee. But I'm quality over quantity now, now my coffee's with just a bit of dark maple syrup, mmmm ;)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/30/2018 1:29:00 PM
I am trying to show you how sweet I eat my food, and I think I may have succeeded.
Date: 7/30/2018 9:28:00 AM
Hey, mom used to make oatmeal that you could stand a shovel up in. cooked overnight in a double boiler on a very large, black, cast iron stove....
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/30/2018 12:03:00 PM
I still like it that way. I LOVE oatmeal! Yum. yum!
Date: 7/30/2018 2:02:00 AM
I like the way you've lined up this write. A funny, cool and amazing poem.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/30/2018 7:33:00 AM
Thank you Augustus. It is totally true, and that makes it happy for me.
Date: 7/29/2018 11:10:00 PM
LOL - that is delightfully disgusting. A beautiful little gem, Caren.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/30/2018 12:53:00 PM
Ah! "delightfully disgusting" sounds like something I'd say ;) LOVE IT <3
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/30/2018 7:33:00 AM
Thank you Line, and it is so what I eat whenever I can.

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