My New Friend
I am learning more about me.
Who I am and who I aim to be.
I have found an outlet of sorts
That allows me all resorts.
The Soup has given me many new friends
Ones that have put me on the path to mends.
All the lovely comments and critiques
Help me to learn new techniques.
Some are family and are biased
But the one that remains the highest.
Comes from a dear sweet friend
Who likes my work to no end.
Or maybe just my name
Whatever, remains the same.
His work speaks to me
In my minds eye can see
All the places and scenes
Playing out on a screen
Some shock like a taser
Thank you dear James Fraser
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