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My New Friend

I am learning more about me. Who I am and who I aim to be. I have found an outlet of sorts That allows me all resorts. The Soup has given me many new friends Ones that have put me on the path to mends. All the lovely comments and critiques Help me to learn new techniques. Some are family and are biased But the one that remains the highest. Comes from a dear sweet friend Who likes my work to no end. Or maybe just my name Whatever, remains the same. His work speaks to me In my minds eye can see All the places and scenes Playing out on a screen Some shock like a taser Thank you dear James Fraser

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Date: 7/1/2009 1:12:00 PM
Wow Kristy, i am lost for words, its a lovely write. Look to the sky, absorb the sun, write about love and lots of fun. Look all around, the subjects and themes, you'll see your words come from your dreams, astound us all with your reams of writes, Kristy De La Keur with the name thats right>>James
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