My New Device
I found a bargain at the smart-phone store
Let out a cry; felt I'd won the war
I took it home, where it soon broke down
My smile was gone, replaced by a frown
I took it back, and showed the clerk
He told me that he couldn't help
Items 'On Sale' -- no returns or exchanges
So, I said I'll write a review on 'Yelp' …
The clerk changed his tune, and in a flash
I had a new device, with a deep price slash
Thanked him profusely and went on my way
Booted it up ~ it burned and crashed
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